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Jewel Chunhau

The King of Anqing raced on horse to Beijing town;
he'd acquiesced and told his new miss she's princess bound.
His intelligence waned, his third leg claimed,common sense?
Not blessed and unwise, he road on his quest in her defence.
The gem in the jewel box she'd taken condemned her.
"Arms length," the court cried "Show a King's strength, sir!"
But, deceit had been plied with sighs in retreat now.
To school went men, paupers or Kings, for Jewel Chunhau
this sprite, his flower, had gone with morning's light snow.


King-Beijing
acquiesced-princess
intelligence-sense
blessed-quest
gem-condemned
length-strength
deceit-retreat 
school-Jewel 
sprite-light

*Chunhua - means spring flower
Contest: Plucky 2 x 9

2/3/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kiser Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 5:44 PM
This flower blossomed quite well.
La France Avatar
February 5, 2015 at 4:33 AM
Debbie, I am visiting your wonderful poem again to thank you for your input on my entry for this contest, I read the contest again and I am just not really understanding it, so I will just leave it and I do like the poem I created very much with the highlighted words, why exactly were they highlighted? Best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
Haight Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 9:09 PM
Very fascinating story, Debbie. You've written a smooth yet intense poem using the required words and rules of rhyme. This was quite challenging to do, and I really like yours. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
Guzzi Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 10:14 PM
Yes it was hard I had to have Rosie explain the rules 3 times to me LOL!
Peranteau Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 7:30 PM
Interesting and quite beautiful story Dear poet ! And you know I likey :) Thanks for the heads up on: Chunhua....I will be using it ! Have a wonderful week Debbie........much love, james
La France Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 9:01 AM
Debbie you have penned a lovely and wonderful poem for the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
A. Sharma Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 3:04 AM
Amazingly beautiful Debbie! So well played wid words,, Superb! GL in contest!
Meade Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 9:56 PM
Nicely done . . . your word craftsmanship is superb! 7
Roper Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 8:28 PM
Debbie, nice write. Good luck on the contest. Eve
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