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The King of Anqing raced on horse to Beijing town; he'd acquiesced and told his new miss she's princess bound. His intelligence waned, his third leg claimed,common sense? Not blessed and unwise, he road on his quest in her defence. The gem in the jewel box she'd taken condemned her. "Arms length," the court cried "Show a King's strength, sir!" But, deceit had been plied with sighs in retreat now. To school went men, paupers or Kings, for Jewel Chunhau this sprite, his flower, had gone with morning's light snow. King-Beijing acquiesced-princess intelligence-sense blessed-quest gem-condemned length-strength deceit-retreat school-Jewel sprite-light *Chunhua - means spring flower Contest: Plucky 2 x 9 2/3/15

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Date: 2/5/2015 5:44:00 PM
This flower blossomed quite well.
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Date: 2/5/2015 4:33:00 AM
Debbie, I am visiting your wonderful poem again to thank you for your input on my entry for this contest, I read the contest again and I am just not really understanding it, so I will just leave it and I do like the poem I created very much with the highlighted words, why exactly were they highlighted? Best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Date: 2/4/2015 9:09:00 PM
Very fascinating story, Debbie. You've written a smooth yet intense poem using the required words and rules of rhyme. This was quite challenging to do, and I really like yours. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/4/2015 10:14:00 PM
Yes it was hard I had to have Rosie explain the rules 3 times to me LOL!
Date: 2/4/2015 7:30:00 PM
Interesting and quite beautiful story Dear poet ! And you know I likey :) Thanks for the heads up on: Chunhua....I will be using it ! Have a wonderful week Debbie........much love, james
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Date: 2/4/2015 9:01:00 AM
Debbie you have penned a lovely and wonderful poem for the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Date: 2/4/2015 3:04:00 AM
Amazingly beautiful Debbie! So well played wid words,, Superb! GL in contest!
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Date: 2/3/2015 9:56:00 PM
Nicely done . . . your word craftsmanship is superb! 7
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Date: 2/3/2015 8:28:00 PM
Debbie, nice write. Good luck on the contest. Eve
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