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Jet Stream

a dead gum tree burns alone on the rusted hills in your jet stream threading a cerulean course toward some obscure island

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/5/2015 6:04:00 AM
A top 7 rating for this beautiful poem, Michael! You present a lovely picture with so few words. Happy Easter! // paul
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Date: 4/5/2015 12:36:00 AM
very nice, Michael! Let me see what other poetry of yours I have not seen!
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Date: 3/25/2015 9:37:00 AM
Michael, this is a beautifully written tanka, so visual, a perfect 7 rating and thanks for visiting my poem, flower fill. . .
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