Jesus Was From a Mongrel Race

Jesus was from A Mongrel Race

He is not to be trusted, he is mixed;
the purity of his divine grace
muddied by the nasty, lazy, dark, 
humans

he may have been a child of love
but where is love in those hateful, fearful,
Earth dwelling, 
parasites

God should have stayed with his own kind
should have mated with a divine female
not polluted his blood with the virus
of ignorance and these slovenly savages

now is the beginning of the curse:
more Nehalem, more Herculean half - Gods
and misfit half-breeds

what made him think that these lowly creatures
are worth anything?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
August 9, 2010 at 4:47 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jack. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 2:54 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned...Very controversial for sure ...Sara
Bowman Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 2:53 PM
It saddens me to see how many missed the point. I guess I should have been more plain. There are those in my country who use the Bible as a weapon against others- through judgment and hate- two things the Bible are very much against.
Fox Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Jesus and God are not my or I believe anybodies saviour.But let's be accurate he was a Jew and like it or not Jews are not mongrels .You fly the US flag your country is made up of people from all over the world . Fifty-six delegates eventually signed your Declaration of Independence in 1776 they must be turning in their graves.
Berken Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:24 PM
It hurts my heart to read this. Jesus was our savior, God sent him to help us. Though we may not deserve it, Gods love is unconditional.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 8:18 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. an expressive write ..just remember God loves each and every creation..it is man/woman that make the errors .. by diverting from His Word.. He is the only one who offers unconditional love.. no strings attached... hope u feel HIS LOVE in your heart my friend.. with luv..
Jenkins Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 7:14 PM
Everyday I think that this world is an experiment that God has created. And it has fallen. Everyday I wonder what he thinks of us... because we are all failures in our own demise. This is a very agressive poem. I like it. Because in some ways it is true to my nature.
Del Fierro Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 6:36 PM
the title caught my attention,and at first,i wasn't going to comment,but i read this and wonder about the similar ideals of a one time world changer and proponent of a distaste for diversity,and that was Hitler.....no doubt our world has it's share of challenges,but messages of hatred only recycle into the same thing with a different disguise...the flipside of the same coin,until we find more worthy "change"......peace , jay
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