Jesus Revisited

Jesus Revisited

He was born out of wedlock and some say his father
was God the Divine I am not sure of that immaculate
projection but genes were involved and I believe that
some assisted fertilization may have started his journey

Adultery would be if not blasphemous too judgemental
what is a piece of paper when progeny was needed to
look after his parents no social security system in those days
when persecution and genocide was on the agenda

He was not so keen on drugs other than wine made from water
a hippie with flowers in heart hair mind and beautiful soul
but nevertheless became a free loving roamer a drifter
poet of the oral tradition full of wisdom and compassion

Does it matter whether Magdalene Mary happened to
become his lover when tables were turned at the temple
how the tides parted to walk on the sea bed or whether
the salt of too many tears of depression floated the message

He was a Middle Eastern guy most probably coloured in skin
with all chakras involved from the mix of a rainbow of promise
he counselled and healed with suggestion charisma almost
hypnotic powers used for the purpose of psychic proportions

He might have sported tattoos depicting a snake or a lion
some contact address emergency number engraved on his
forehead a belly ring maybe of a cross to be cast to foreshadow
his inner and outer appearance scarred healing healed

Much like him I am horrified by wars murder hypocrisy crusading terror
napalm orange agents Hiroshima Holocaust and the senseless
slaughter of groups others Peoples and ideas peace humankind
I passionately care for his message and his proposal his resilience

To stand up for injustice for freedom from evil and freedom of
passive resistance rebellion and faith and beliefs for what matters

He would have been a big pal with the Buddha spiritual leaders of 
another age time place contingency context hegemony plight
would maybe not mind a panoply of Hindu Gods and Godesses
and have the Koran next to his straw mattress fire and all

I care for Jesus and he cares for me

22nd July 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/22/2016 7:20:00 AM
A great poem to read over and over again ... Any poetry lover with a rational attitude would share my view ... Well chosen simple but rich words to develop a minority view ...
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/22/2016 8:02:00 AM
Hi Probir, I think I replied to Silent One and it went to you. And thank you for your comment and engagement.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/22/2016 8:00:00 AM
Hey Silent, thank you. I guess a lot of things may have to be said and some will trigger reactions from many sides of the philosophical spectrum. I think that it is pretty clear, that I am not offending Jesus, not religion, nor anybody who might have a different view on whether Jesus wore a nipple ring or not. I respect all belief systems and faiths, unless they call for fanatic actions or infringe on my own spiritual faith. I think, that Christianity is quite cool and maybe there will be a little soup discussion. XXX Kai
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