Jesters

the jester said
that the yellow suns
were better than the green
suns
and the green suns were worse than
the pink ones

all the same the jester said
volumes

happy to fail in the dressing
room
mirror
before the king
and the hangman’s noose
never 

under the green suns
before eclipse
watching the pink 
suns
to begin and to end

but longing for yellow
suns
and the shadows
they cast
before the king 
and the hangman’s noose
never

happy to tumble
juggle
and sing
straining for yellow
suns
and the shadows they 
cast

violently searching
for the minstrel to play
the songs of royal
liking
and the attitude
of dress
to acquaint the court
with the mystery of green suns
over taking the yellow

before the king
and the hangman’s noose
never
straining for yellow
suns 
and the shadows they
cast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 3:42 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor Justin and the best to you in the finals. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 9:41 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 2:05 PM
Congratulations on moving to the next round with this great poem, Justin! Wishing you joy and happiness in the New Year, love, Carolyn
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December 20, 2009 at 11:34 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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December 5, 2009 at 7:52 PM
Congrad's on your feature! Light & Love
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December 5, 2009 at 12:43 AM
The effort is timeless. Not many can write a poem like this, that takes one back into time to the true life of a jester. I for one cannot. Congratulations on your poem being featured. It was worth it!
Sheart Avatar
December 4, 2009 at 7:27 PM
Hi Justin, congrats on your feature poem this week! Love Light Patty
Fisher Avatar
December 3, 2009 at 12:46 PM
Many congrats on your piece being featured this week. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 4:44 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poem being featured this week Justin. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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November 30, 2009 at 12:58 PM
Many congratulations on your poem being featured Justin >> James
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November 30, 2009 at 6:03 AM
Excellente write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A. W. www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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