Jess

She was great with sheep or cattle, and would bound beside the horse,
always full of energy… a border collies best of course.
We’ve never owned another breed, but these collies we address,
we’ve had a few upon the farm… but none as good as Jess.

Two of her pups still work for us, and both bear her working trait,
Jess always kept them both in line, and ruled the dinner plate.
When de-horning, crutching, shearing, or the time of need to press,
one whistle from our Father… and first on the job was Jess.

And when her time came for motherhood, Dad never feared the worst,
because he knew that top security, for her pups came first.
If us kids were out of order, one growl would have us guess,
pat her pups then move away… leave the mothering to Jess.

Jess never was the playful type; she preferred her working life,
a stranger walking to the door would often feel the strife.
Not that she bit to leave a scar she just needed to assess
the territory that they stood on… did all belong to Jess.

Oh yes she would protect us, and front position she would take.
Once stood between both Ron and I, and a big red-bellied snake.
But that’s just one of many times, for our Mum to say, “God bless,
we could have lost one of you boys… if it hadn’t been for Jess.”

But time became her master, her sight got dim her legs wore out.
Instinct made her struggle, in the only life she knew about.
The pups were leaving her behind; she was coping less and less.
Many evenings Dad sat on the porch… looking down at Jess.

Dad took the gun and slowly walked. Jess followed down the track.
Mum, Ron and I cried at the table, when only Dad came back.
What broke our hearts most of all, and left an anguish inside me,
was little Brucey asking, “Why won’t Jess come and eat her tea?”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 9/8/2015 6:54:00 PM
Absolutely astounding poem about life on the ranch. You bring tears to my eyes and remind me of the sadness of passing of pets and others. It's the mixing of the sad and happy that can never be separated in real life.
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Date: 9/9/2015 9:33:00 PM
G'day Duke... it's the sad reality of farm life and working dogs. Farmers cannot be too sentimental no matter how much it affects them - thanks Duke - Lindsay
Date: 9/6/2015 7:16:00 AM
- A truly wonderful poem, Lindsay ...... your story leaves a tear in my eye - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:55:00 AM
Thank you for your comment Anne-Lise. It's the sad reality of farm life - Lindsay
Date: 9/5/2015 6:28:00 PM
a heart wrenching poem Lindsay hugs 7
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 9/8/2015 2:52:00 AM
Hello Shadow... yes, it's hard to lose a farming mate but time does and hard work takes its toll - Lindsay
Date: 9/4/2015 11:31:00 AM
Teary eyed, Lindsay. You are in your finest here. So lovely really. hugs!
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:48:00 AM
Thank you once again Kim for your support. It is sad, but working dogs do finally wear out - thank you - Lindsay
Date: 9/3/2015 10:07:00 PM
You've done this rhyme in a story form poem, and it reads so smooth, I became so engrossed. Good write, I can relate to this love for dogs as my granddaughter has one, though it's now growing old, anytime he'll be gone now.
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:45:00 AM
G'day Josefina... thank you for your comment. Dogs and cats become a family member and when age catches up with them we mourn as we do a family member - Lindsay
Date: 9/3/2015 10:04:00 PM
Lindsay, you are heaven sent to Soup. Another WINNING poem. well, it would win if it were entered into some contest!! I need to go see if I ever put you on my fave poet list. I feel stupid if I have not done it yet. this is so awesome a poem. FAVE
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:41:00 AM
You are such a positive person Andrea and your encouragement is much appreciated. Thank you very much - Lindsay
Date: 9/3/2015 5:27:00 AM
I love your wonderful and sweet poem.... Your love for your beautiful is deep. Excellent write........A.M.
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:36:00 AM
Thank you for reading and leaving a positive comment Afolabi. Working animals should not be pets but they are loved, respected, and deeply missed - Lindsay
Date: 9/2/2015 12:58:00 PM
Lindsay, oh my gosh, I am weeping like a fool for Jess, what an incredible write full of deep and true love for this creature, you captured the essence of this wonderful dog and what she meant to you, awesome write and thanks for visiting my neighbor poem, darn you, I didn't want to cry today!!
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:30:00 AM
Hello Broken Wings... I'm sorry for the tears BW and thank you for your wonderful comment. Unfortunately on farms, getting attached to the animals can end up in heartbreak - thank you BW - Lindsay
Date: 9/1/2015 10:25:00 PM
Excellent!
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:18:00 AM
Hello Michael... thanks for reading and commenting - Lindsay
Date: 9/1/2015 10:20:00 PM
A wonderful story about a much loved dog. I enjoyed reading your sweet poem, Lindsay! Love, Kim
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Date: 9/8/2015 2:16:00 AM
Hello Kim... I'm pleased you enjoyed this kind of sad tale Kim. Thank you for commenting - Lindsay
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