Jersey Maid

Bright blonde-haired girl
competitive
From the start, made a nine
Mile ride
With a spirited heart, straight
to the 
Summit of Telegraph Hill, I’ll
guess
She freewheeled back ‘just for
the thrill’

A gifted person, with a giving
heart
A literate future ‘to be’ in life
her part

A maritime yen, her soul
would hold
Sailing, snorkeling, diving in
waters 
Weather hot or cold

A present in fiction she gave
to this world
Plots and intrigues in
Atlantis unfurled
Loved her John, lived to the
full, help for
Others in her will so loyal
gave fans her all

Lived in Florida, she loved it
there, would
Relate to others of its when’s
and where’s
To St. Augustine she made
foray, taking my
Advice; I’m oh so glad she
enjoyed the stay.

Poetry in whispers a favourite
place on
Soup she’d pen with style and
grace
Haiku, idyll, rhyme, sonnet,
prose.

Carolyn, we miss you, but none
can stay
This earth is finite all here
fades away.

Your talent is blending, way 
Above where
Death is not, amidst eternal
Love
Keep us in your thoughts we
wish today
That we may meet where time
has no sway
A greater bond we’ll share there
new

The deeper depth the truer
true.

©Joe Maverick 16-8-2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Horne Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 12:02 PM
wanted to read this lovely tribute to Carolyn again - really beautiful write, Joe
Maverick Avatar
November 25, 2021 at 9:04 AM
It's all I could do Jack, just a Scratch on the surface of who She was.'
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 3:00 PM
came back here again to tell you I really want to look up the people you told me about but my life is just too full of other things right now. Hubbie is frustrated I am not paying attention to him too. haha. I just got too much going on. Hopefully on my vaycay time I can finally look into these good people.
Maverick Avatar
October 4, 2021 at 1:07 AM
To follow up Andrea, I think you Will find the lady Is organised to a Point that it will be a breeze for you'
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October 4, 2021 at 12:06 AM
OK I've re soup mailed in the .meantime I'll try to let her know Of you' the twitter phone is in pretty bad screen shape so it may take half an hour (but you're worth it )
Thirtyseven Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 6:02 AM
Beautiful tribute Joe.
Maverick Avatar
October 3, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Thanks Scott, you and all the others are occupying most Of my thoughts right now so I am finding it hard to even think of writing as things stand, all my best I want to reach out in any way practicable and am trying right now as much as I can.'
Horne Avatar
September 4, 2021 at 8:45 AM
lovely tribute to our friend here, Joe
Maverick Avatar
September 10, 2021 at 1:15 PM
To good to hear from you Jack Her memory will live on through Her work, and in our thoughts My friend '
Horsman Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 10:55 PM
Wow, i'm late to comment as usual. So glad to have read this, Joe, love the tribute, and yes i remember Carolyn coming to my aid, when bullied on my first day here on soup.
Maverick Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 1:46 PM
Hi Harry good to hear more of Her quality, thank you for taking time to comment'
La France Avatar
August 23, 2021 at 11:48 AM
Joe, your poem is beautiful, thank you for taking part in the Tributes To Carolyl ~ Constance
Maverick Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 1:48 PM
Many kind wishes to you Constance, thank you'
Peranteau Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 6:04 AM
yep, Carolyn...bless you.....much love and congratulations, james
Maverick Avatar
August 27, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Thank you James, so good of you."
Alex Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 6:31 AM
Great Work. Beautiful Tribute.
Maverick Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:16 AM
Hello Cristuraj, so good to hear from you and thank You for taking time to comment, it was an honour To receive potd and to represent Carolyn to this level of Response.'
Agustin Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 5:07 AM
Thanks so much for sharing this, enabling me to know more intimately Carolyn (though I will surely miss her and her uplifting comments). God bless you.
Maverick Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:14 AM
Hi Beat A, thank you for stopping by, good to know of Carolyns Effect on your poetic journey.. She was most helpful to many I would guess as I have put before potd is Most fitting'
Edmonds  Avatar
August 19, 2021 at 2:25 AM
A wonderful tribute poem Joe, Carolyn will always be dearly loved and sadly missed. Congratulations on poem of the day… Belle
Maverick Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:11 AM
Belle so kind of you to give your thoughts on our dear friend And also on this piece reaching potd, Carolyn is still impacting Soup..'
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 7:26 PM
Hi Joe, my occasion's rare with the potd page, albeit, my visits to the homepage blog, share a privileged interactive light for me. I am glad that Carolyn was an accomplished poetess. Her notoriety grew as did her joy for writing poems. Confessedly, I've 2-years at ps, and the relevance of her life beyond, is made recent by what is reflected by the many tributes of this remarkable woman. I'm pleased to open my eyes and heart once more, to your pivotal POTD. A blessed exposé my friend, Aloha!
Maverick Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:09 AM
Thank you so much William, good to reply to this respectful Summation of Carolyn, and the potd spot I hope to hear more Of you as things go along, great to see your empathy and care'
Rodrigues Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 5:40 PM
Lovely, Joe! Congrats on POTD!
Maverick Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:03 AM
Thank you for that Kim, I am so pleased at the result And Carolyn being part of potd as well A pleasure to have put this down'
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 4:34 PM
yes, I DID see it and no wonder it got POTD!! Congrats
Maverick Avatar
August 20, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Andrea, thanks again always; always good to see your Comment..'
Allison Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 4:06 PM
Dropping back with many congrats on your win Joe-) hugs Jan xx
Maverick Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 4:07 PM
I shall give your page a visit Jan, you are very welcome Here'
Mcintosh Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 3:53 AM
Congrats on POTD!!! Love it. God bless you again, Love, Gina
Maverick Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 10:26 AM
WOW.' poem of the day..' 'Carolyn' you helped me do it.' Thanks for your welcome Comment Regina..!
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 11:37 PM
Congrats on POTD. Carolyn will be remembered and so will your lovely tribute to her!
Maverick Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 10:27 AM
Thanks Krish, I believe Carolyn will be in the same Mind.'
Nicole Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 6:37 PM
Such a lovely tribute to Carolyn. Your words caress softly around me and my heart. She will missed, but never forgotten. Congratulations Joe, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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August 18, 2021 at 11:43 AM
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August 18, 2021 at 11:40 AM
Brandy so good of you to comment as warmley, Thanks from me and I am sure From her'
Maverick Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 10:29 AM
Peck Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 1:25 PM
What a beautiful way to remember Carolyn (altho I didn't know her). Congratulations on POTD!
Maverick Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 11:42 AM
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August 18, 2021 at 10:31 AM
Hi Ann, I guess I got it right; put Down stuff Carolyn did & we discussed, and we are both in potd Fitting..,'
Kelly Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 1:14 PM
I miss Carolyn even though I didn’t know her, through your lovely memorial. Congrats on your POTD, Joe-well deserved.
Maverick Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 3:38 PM
Deb thank you, I advised look through her writes, and you will know of her soul, and I am sure Those of us here who interacted with her will also reflect some of her influence'
Kauffman Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 11:41 AM
Such a lovely portrait of Carolyn Joe. Congratulations on your POTD.
Maverick Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Thank you also Sam so good to receive your great comment
Jayasankar Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 10:11 AM
What a lovely tribute to dear Carolyn... Hearty congrats on your POTD Joe Maverick... God bless.. ~ Ani
Maverick Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 3:41 PM
And God's good blessings to You Anitha, glad you liked Carolyn glad you visited'
Balasubramanian Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Wonderful tribute to Carolyn. Congratulations on your well deserved Potd. Enjoy the honour
Maverick Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 3:46 PM
Rama, I had good inspiration supplied by Knowing Carolyn, and wished merely to represent her quality's Thank you'
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 7:58 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A wonderful write/tribute. Have a blessed day writing away......................
Maverick Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 3:47 PM
And thank you for this kind Review Paula, God bless'
La France Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 7:57 AM
Joe, so happy your tribute to Carolyn became POEM OF THE DAY that is so deserving ~Constance
Seeker Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 7:45 AM
Beautiful tribute, Joe! Congrats on POTD
Maverick Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 3:49 PM
Hello there and many thanks ?? She was an asset to this site'
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