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Jerry

I addressed the young stranger sitting alone on a park bench: "Hi, I'm Jason Bills." His handshake was firm, his smile uncertain but warm. "Hello, Jason. I--I don't know my name or where I am!" And so began the odd but fulfilling relationship between the amnesiac and my entire little sheltered Southern town. Enveloping him in concern and love, we created "Jerry" and a life for him, making him brother, son, friend to us all. We took pride in our--uh, invention--gladly taking care of his needs and wants. He did odd jobs quite skillfully; we, of course, paid him in cash. At first, we asked few questions, since he so quickly became nervous. Then, after a few weeks, the town's conscience reared its accusing head, demanding that we make an all-out effort to awaken his past. Loved ones surely were grieving and searching for him. We weren't very subtle. We probed and prodded: "Any memories, even vague ones, of family? Past surroundings? Profession? Hobbies? Religious faith? Problems that might've traumatized . . . ?" By then, "Jerry" was trembling, almost in tears. "I--I just don't remember--ANYTHING. I'm sorry!" We promised, "Okay, Jerry, no more interrogations! Some day soon, maybe we can contact authorities to help us discover who you are. Surely you, deep down, want to know." Jerry's smile was gone. The next day, so was he.

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Date: 4/10/2017 9:07:00 PM
Janice, i am making sure I did select the correct rating (7).
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/10/2017 9:15:00 PM
Thank you, Anil! I do love those 7's. Janice
Date: 4/8/2017 7:14:00 PM
Good and not-so-good lessons in this prose-poem. Thanks for making something follow us home and to Church. Shalom & thanks Janice. Anil
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/8/2017 8:19:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anil! Janice
Date: 4/6/2017 10:51:00 PM
Janice. I enjoyed the read and think this is rather creative. I was in suspense until the end. This also speaks to the fears in us, the insecurities in us. We are not comfortable will others who are contented with themselves.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/6/2017 10:59:00 PM
Curtis, thank you very much! Janice

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