Jerks of Jealousy

JERKS OF JEALOUSY


Two thick n' lovely friends, friends forever type
Ugly poverty had its brutal curse on both of them
Thick n' thin of life,  equally did they share...
Both good at sports, budding athletes of their locality
New contest announced, In prize-trophy, sports shoe !
Both took up challenge, preparation on in full-swing...
Motivation n' moral  boost-up, coach and the trainee,  both were for both!
Arrived the D- day - One lost , One won!!
This is the point where story takes a U-turn..
One who lost got jealous, best moments till date
dissolved and diluted.
Wicked jealousy corroded his mind like sulphuric acid...
In fit of jealousy burnt he the shoes won by his own dear friend...
Another contest declared in neighbouring town, winner friend said,
I won't partake due to ligament tear.. but buddy you have to win this time
The new shoes I won, you wear and keep it as my gift all yours!
Good luck my friend he patted and left, still unaware 
about shoes' fate which he had kept safe in chest.
                   



                           © Anulaxmi Nayak, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 7:13 PM
A new take on the story of the carpenter, with a different theme, same result. Protagonist would have benefited had he not entertained evil thoughts.very good, Anu! hugs!
Nayak Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 10:49 PM
Dear Kim...thank you for your feedback dear:-)Carpenter story.....i guess i am unaware...or may be in school i read..not sure...bt jealousy will corrode like acid corrodes the container in which it is stored....thanks again dear, love, Anu:-)
Manassian Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 1:58 PM
What a fitting story about what jealousy is capable of. How intriguing. Hugs, my dear
Nayak Avatar
August 18, 2015 at 2:00 PM
Dear Eileen, thank you :-) dear ....love, Anu:-)
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