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Jenna's Saloon On Soup Creek

Jenna’s Saloon on Soup Creek
Tania, Deb, Kim, Constance, Belle Darlene, Connie, Paula as well Work for Jenna in her saloon Waiting on tables in fine tune. Singing as customers are served All things abnormal are observed The gals listen to what goes on Reporting all to Mayor Tom. The saloon’s a place to relax Where the regulars meet and chat With plenty to drink and to eat A night at Jenna’s is a treat. Sheriff Koplin, David the Ranger They watch over any stranger Who is maybe looking for loot Or someone they may wish to shoot. Onto trouble, sharp as a knife Is gambler Milton, faster than light Deputy sheriff Michael Tor And Prospector Pete on his horse. Of Blacksmith Rees rogues be aware He's got ultra hot furnace where They'll find themselves burnt if they dare Bestow folk mischief or despair. But hey ho when the day is done Everyone is out to have fun Laughter, singing, it’s never bleak At Jenna’s saloon on Soup Creek.
*+*+* 1st September 2022
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Tor Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 5:17 AM
Belle you made us all proud with this wonderful rendition of Soup Creek. I am sure The Mayor will be back soon from Spain. I hope you have a drink ready for him when he gets of his horse traveling all the way from Spain I would imagine he would be very thirsty and his horse too. Belle Jenna Saloon is the best in Soup Creek and all the ladies there are as nice as can be. Looking forward to see the Mayor when he gets back. We will see you later Belle. See Ya...
Edmonds  Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 12:58 PM
Thank you Michael, I appreciate what you’ve said and the compliment to Jenna’s saloon and the ladies, of course there’ll be a drink for the Mayor Tom and his horse. Keep your eye on Soup Creek I’m posting another addition soon… Belle
May Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 6:01 AM
I enjoyed the story of Jenna's saloon, Very nicely penned Belle
Edmonds  Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 12:49 PM
Thank you very much Joseph, pleased you enjoyed the read… Belle
Logan Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 3:13 PM
Thank you for picking up the pen to advertise our town, Belle. Good write.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 5:14 PM
Thank you Jenna, love the ongoing story of Soup Creek and enjoyed participating… Belle
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 12:55 PM
Soup creek Belle is turning into our very own San junipero, a parallel world where all us diverse characters meet up and interact, your poem adds much fun and enhances the alter egos we’ve somehow acquired, A night at J.Lo’s saloon can’t be beat, cheers David
Edmonds  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 5:11 PM
David, Soup Creek is certainly developing into a fantastic ongoing story which includes some of us poets and hopefully many more in future instalments. I agree a night at J.Lo’s can’t be beat. Here’s cheers to you too. Thank you, Belle
Leffanta Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 11:08 AM
Swell, Belle! Aloha!
Edmonds  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 4:42 PM
Grazie amico mio, Rico… Maloha, Belle
Hankins Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 9:27 AM
I love it, Belle. You've picked up the theme and done well with it. I'm sure Jenna will be pleased! The last time I saw her, she said profits were rolling in. (chuckling)
Edmonds  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 1:40 PM
Thank you Milton, I’m pleased Jenna’s saloon is doing well, she’ll soon be worth a mint… Belle
Buhagiar Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Soup Creek is fast becoming famous. NB My poetry site is now opened if you are interested.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 1:36 PM
Thank you Victor, I will look at your poetry site with pleasure… Belle
M  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Love this Belle….written in true Soup Creek spirit….. good fun! Gotta get back to waiting the Tables now…..Debx
Edmonds  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 11:21 AM
Thank you Deb, I’ll be there with you in the saloon waiting on the customers too… Belle
Cunningham Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 6:54 AM
The legend of Soup Creek lives on Belle, brilliant write, I'm looking forward to getting back and having a drink in Jenna's saloon. Tom
Edmonds  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 11:19 AM
Thank you Tom, I’ve enjoyed reading the continuing Soup Creek poem/story and it was fun writing this addition too…. Belle
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