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Jellyfish and Me

Young kids enjoy playing in the yard, until the dock called out come over here. Alluring water caught their eyes, white shining somethings are swimming by. What could they be we all called out, jellyfish was the adult reply. We watched as they swim closer and closer, then I found myself in the water with them. My friends had pushed me in, so funny they thought it would be to take a swim. A big strong hand I did find, like always my daddy to my rescue. Inflicted with immediate itching and scratching, now the crying began. Off to the bathtub I was pulled, baking soda bath then wrapped in greasy lotion. Itching and scratching for days to come, all the so call friends are now gone. Date Written: 8/6/2020 Note: A true story................. 2 Place INFLICTIONS Contest Judged: 8/15/2020 Sponsored by: Silent One

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Date: 8/26/2020 10:31:00 PM
Aah...painful one... I imagined the situation Paula mam.. Congratulations on your win in the contest.:-) Take care.Much love from Deepa..:-)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2020 2:08:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was very painful. Have a wonderful day.................
Date: 8/19/2020 6:53:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in Silent One's contest: INFLICTIONS :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/20/2020 1:14:00 PM
Thank You, for writing. It was an honor to have the win. Have a great day...............
Date: 8/15/2020 4:04:00 AM
A very different take on the contest, always nice to share a true story from childhood.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/16/2020 10:34:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. I did not know I had a win. It was an honor to have the win. Have a great day...............
Date: 8/6/2020 2:18:00 PM
Those painful memories of your younger days you never forget, kids can be so cruel at times. Hope you're well Paula. Tom
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/7/2020 8:07:00 AM
Thanks for your note. I am OK. Are you OK????? Yes, kids can be so cruel. Have a wonderful day...............
Date: 8/6/2020 12:40:00 PM
Ohooooooooooo Jelly fish, I always have steered clear of them, shame Paula, not a nice experience and really shameful of the people that pushed you in, but a great write. Stay well and safe
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/6/2020 1:01:00 PM
Thanks for writing. Kid will be kids. I was about 5 when this happened. I can still remember it like it was yesterday. Somethings we cannot forget. Have a great day...............

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