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Jellyfish

I am a drifting Jellyfish my hopes are none to all I love a place and a time the current rips it from me I have no home, I have no constant variables fill my mind I cannot show what I love but really it's a given All I want is a stable home no movement in my waters The selfish Sea only sees it's self one day I will be gone Beware you selfish Ocean my defense is my sting

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2016 2:47:00 AM

Velvet Burghardt, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. **LINDA**

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/27/2014 2:56:00 PM

Nice descriptive set of couplets. In the first line of the sixth verse, "it's self" is really only one word that can be presented as "itself". Everything else looks good.