Jello Shots

A man swallowed Jello shots Then fell on some cooking pots He was burnt and scolded He fell against the wall Looked like he was doing some squats

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Craig Bowden

Date: 1/7/2022 5:35:00 PM

Never done jello shots but sounds like fun.

Daisy Ward
Date: 1/10/2022 9:09:00 AM

liquor inside jello and chilled, it tastes good.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/7/2022 10:04:00 AM

Very nice! but in limerick the third and fourth lines share a different rhyme. and squats doesn't fully Rhyme with shots and pots! But enjoyed. Thanks - Marshall

Daisy Ward
Date: 1/10/2022 9:10:00 AM

Thanks, I thought it was a rhyme. I will change it.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/7/2022 9:54:00 AM

Quite the night that must have been!

Daisy Ward
Date: 1/10/2022 9:11:00 AM

yes, it is