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JELLO SHOTS

A man swallowed Jello shots Then fell on some cooking pots He was burnt and scolded He fell against the wall Looked like he was doing some squats

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Date: 1/7/2022 5:35:00 PM
Never done jello shots but sounds like fun.
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Daisy Ward
Date: 1/10/2022 9:09:00 AM
liquor inside jello and chilled, it tastes good.
Date: 1/7/2022 10:04:00 AM
Very nice! but in limerick the third and fourth lines share a different rhyme. and squats doesn't fully Rhyme with shots and pots! But enjoyed. Thanks - Marshall
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Daisy Ward
Date: 1/10/2022 9:10:00 AM
Thanks, I thought it was a rhyme. I will change it.
Date: 1/7/2022 9:54:00 AM
Quite the night that must have been!
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Daisy Ward
Date: 1/10/2022 9:11:00 AM
yes, it is