Jello Shots

A man swallowed Jello shots
Then fell on some cooking pots
He was burnt and scolded
He fell against the wall
Looked like he was doing some squats
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Bowden Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 5:35 PM
Never done jello shots but sounds like fun.
Ward Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 9:09 AM
liquor inside jello and chilled, it tastes good.
Ahmed Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Very nice! but in limerick the third and fourth lines share a different rhyme. and squats doesn't fully Rhyme with shots and pots! But enjoyed. Thanks - Marshall
Ward Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 9:10 AM
Thanks, I thought it was a rhyme. I will change it.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 9:54 AM
Quite the night that must have been!
Ward Avatar
January 10, 2022 at 9:11 AM
yes, it is
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