Jehovah-Shalom

Come to me O lord that heals
           Not only my body but my spirit yield

    When I’m here in this place, I cry out to you Lord
            My words insignificant but my heart one accord

    You’ve shaped my life since I was eight
             You’ve dealt with my questions and my debate

    In my disobedience you showed me love
             Patiently waiting for me to again look above

    I know as I disappoint myself I do not disappoint You
             For in You all knowing, all loving You knew
                     That I could never go far and I grew
                             As You waited

     How long have You waited for your children to see
            That it’s all built on love and they’ve been deceived

     I cry out to You Jehovah to open our eyes
             Allow the things that have hindered to be now despised

     With good intentions we lost the truth
             Afford us Jehovah, the journey to find all truth

                     For if God is the truth and the truth is God
                             Then wisdom will begin where the journey ends 

 Shalom is the kind of peace that results from being a whole person in right                         

                        relationship to God and to one's fellow man.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/16/2012 9:46:00 PM
Hi Laurie, it's old Ron just letting you know I'm still kickin', maybe not as high but still kickin. Thanks for checking on me, I have kind of lost interest in writing, so how are you? Great I hope! I love this poem, very heartfelt. You're the best Ron
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Date: 3/20/2009 1:53:00 AM
Amen Laurie a wholesome poemRgds Brian
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Date: 3/16/2009 7:26:00 AM
This prayer can start my day any time. Keep the faith firm, and spread it gently. This is a delicious write. Love.
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Date: 3/14/2009 9:57:00 PM
I'm impressed. You write beautifully. JDB
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Date: 3/14/2009 10:02:00 AM
beautiful written my friend, may God bless you and shalom is a great peace that comes only from him, a peace with total wholness nothing broken nothing taken apart, peace be with you dear from diane
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Date: 3/14/2009 8:51:00 AM
Laurie, this one blew me away and brought tears to my eyes.... I really loved it. God has been good to me... and there are things I'm struggling to understand... but I can't deny He has been there for me. Thanks for this awesome and inspiring poem, I'm faving it. Thanks too for your kind comments on "Missing You," it was appreciated. :) Love, Amy
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Date: 3/14/2009 1:44:00 AM
Hallelujah... Laurie thanksbe that you share your gifts with us on PS.Rgds Brian & thank for your welcome comments Have a good weekend
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Date: 3/13/2009 8:00:00 PM
Laurie, your poem reflects deep and abiding faith. You know you don't disappoint God, because you are so sure of his love. You give the reader great inspiration and hope. Thank you, Carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2009 1:16:00 PM
You do have a God given gift, Blessings and Shalom. Ron
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Date: 3/13/2009 10:29:00 AM
Deeply beautiful Laurie, just like you. Love, Shar
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Date: 3/13/2009 7:45:00 AM
absolutely beautiful, Laurie! you have expressed your belief so well and it is so touching how you've built faith onto yourself ... praise the one above! and i love the line: wisdom will begin where the journey ends... gosh that is so true... an excellent write my friend!! :) ~ Arany
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Date: 3/13/2009 7:10:00 AM
What a beautiful opening to my day, reading this lovely poem, ...and by sharing it with us....you are giving the rest of us a 'piece of your peace'. Shalom to you my friend...
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:58:00 AM
Wow I would have rated this a ten but the numbers stop at 7 very well done Shoe-shine
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:47:00 AM
....a breath of fresh air to myself this morning to say the very least!!!~Smile~And I have a very strong feeling because of this annointed write, that "You Yourself," are going to have a very blessed and beautiful day!!!~Smile~"Thank You For The Beauty~My Love Always To 'You and Your Loves,' Forever, John!!!"~"Perfect Write Laurie!!!":):)
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:42:00 AM
Smile~What a beautiful song and prayer to awaken to this morning dear lady~Blessed and annointed by "The Father of All Light Himself!!!"~Smile:) Now I would say that this is the way that one should always start their day!!!~"Good Morning Beautifully Blessed and Gifted Laurie Ginn!!!"~"Your Faith" is a wonderful beacons light for many to behold I believe!!!:)....cont....
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:19:00 AM
very timely for me (Catholic) and for others as well! nicely written, Jim
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Date: 3/13/2009 6:00:00 AM
I love the emotions shown today.. I have read some moving pieces.. Love the honesty in this piece...I am in there with you.
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