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Jennifer Ellen Walkershttps://onedrive.live.com/redir.aspx?cid=5fa89d7ed77463b6&parentid=5FA89D7ED77463B6%21811&parId=5FA89D7ED77463B6%21296&authkey=%21APA2w1tOvFIuyds&ithint=folder%2c&resid=5FA89D7ED77463B6%21164

My sister got the birthday party picture to me in this link if you want to see our whole family with Mom and check out the slide show! The picture that is showing is from a wedding of my sister Mel a year or two before Mom's birthday party!

Jubilation filled the room and lit my mother’s face on her 80th birthday.

Everyone she loved, both friends and family, had come from near and far away.

A huge surprise, the secret was well kept by all, even by her children, all seven!

Never had she felt such joy; through tears she said,“This is how it must be in Heaven."

For Line Gauthier's  'Bite Size Poem no13' Poetry Contest

Written 3/20/2015 and dedicated to a beautifully spiritual and strong woman who raised eight children, one that died in the 80's, and who lost her husband to Alzheimer's over a decade ago. Today she lives alone in our Iowa home town and fends for herself. Spry and independent, she will be 90 next March (2022). 

Please check out the slide show (see above) of the wonderful family reunion we had in 2013!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/14/2024 9:34:00 AM
Such a heartfelt tribute, Andrea. Large families are on the decline, but they are a warm embrace and fertile ground for our adult relationships.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/14/2024 11:07:00 PM
Thanks for taking the time to see this poem about my mom. You are so sweet.
Date: 4/12/2015 9:40:00 AM
Sorry I'm late on this Andrea. Congrats on your win. Thank you for entering my contest.
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Date: 4/6/2015 7:52:00 PM
Wonderful that you shared such a personal look at your family, Andrea! Lovely tribute to your mother, this is!
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Date: 4/6/2015 6:25:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your wonderful win with this beautifully written tribute to your mother, 7, the side show was great
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Date: 4/6/2015 12:20:00 PM
Andrea, such a wonderful tribute to your mother, and what an amazing woman she seems to be. You are very fortunate to still have her in your life as an independent mom at her age. Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/6/2015 1:02:00 AM
Andrea, such fun to make merry with mom and all dear ones. Congrats. Mohan
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Date: 4/5/2015 9:36:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andie! Happy for you too, as you can still enjoy her presence in your life! Kim :)
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Date: 4/5/2015 2:11:00 PM
You are so blessed to still have her in your life. My mother died way to young and I miss her every day. Congrats to you my dear. BG ( my middle name is Jean...) BG
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Date: 4/5/2015 1:34:00 PM
Many congrats Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/27/2015 7:48:00 AM
From the blessing of a good mother giving and raising another gifted woman, though a little uptight concerning grammar, but no one is perfect. Beautiful poem and good luck in the contest. Hugs, Rob.
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Rob Carmack
Date: 4/5/2015 11:46:00 AM
I see a congrats is in order. A :) with a hug.
Date: 3/27/2015 6:10:00 AM
I looked at the slide show of your large family, and loved the tribute poem to your mother. Julia, xx
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Date: 3/23/2015 1:18:00 PM
A wonderful birthday tribute to your mum Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/23/2015 10:33:00 AM
Wonderful! Family counts, we don't always get along but we always LOVE!!!!
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Date: 3/22/2015 5:38:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one dedicated to your mom and one that truly honors her..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for dropping by and thanks for the honor of placing in your contest...Sara
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Date: 3/22/2015 2:48:00 PM
Hey sis, what a tribute to Mom. She sure was teary eyed. Cried for longer than I ever thought she would. Remember how she turned and ran away from us. She was so surprised. I'm so glad that we were able to do this for her.
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:15:00 AM
Happy happy birthday to your mom, Andrea! And awww-- that last line clinched it for me-- I remember you telling me about that surprise birthday party-- kudos to all of you for pulling that off! I know somebody who shares her birthday, spry definitely applies to him as well! Hug her for me, please! And thank you so much for my placement in your contest :)! I missed your first one and wanted to kinda surprise you and wrote that one quick, I entered last--actually will tell you more in email.
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Date: 3/22/2015 9:46:00 AM
Love your picture. LOve you. LOve, daver
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Date: 3/22/2015 8:07:00 AM
A lovely dedication to your mother, Andrea! May she have a happy birthday and many more to follow. You beat us by one sibling...there were7 of us, my eldest brother died 12 years ago. // paul
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Date: 3/22/2015 5:39:00 AM
A beautiful gem in celebration of your mom's birthday Andrea.. praying that God will bless her on her special and that her birthday will be a special one this year.. luv Wilma
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Date: 3/22/2015 12:29:00 AM
And a big Happy Birthday for your Mother from Noah and I dear poet ! Second Acrostic that I read today( great Acrostic) ......Have a blessed night.....much love, james
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Date: 3/21/2015 11:42:00 PM
I remember you telling me of this Andrea and I love this tender Acrostic about your mother. Beautiful!
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Date: 3/21/2015 10:27:00 PM
a celebration of life . . . a wonderful life. Thanks for sharing -- I love these types of poems. 7
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Date: 3/21/2015 5:43:00 PM
a very touching poem, andrea! how lucky you are to have such a close family and your mom close by and still in great shape.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/21/2015 7:14:00 PM
Sadly, she is not nearby, Ilene. None of my family are.
Date: 3/21/2015 3:31:00 PM
Your mother is truly blessed!! She knows only love - and no amount of wealth will ever buy that!! My very best regards to you all! :) john.
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Date: 3/21/2015 2:45:00 PM
A splendid tribute Andrea! Always, Keith:-)
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