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Jealous of the Sun

Should I be jealous of the sun Forever it will know the sky Its passion in a fiery rage Is never slighted to my eye To see the world at every stage Must surely be of valued fare To warm the days of creatures all With intercontinental flair With countless visions set to oil In paintings that the world has known It counters with its dusk and dawn Creating paintings of its own But then I think it still must cope With clouds and rain to foil its show So such is life we all must bear Should I be jealous, I say no

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Bill Baker

Date: 4/14/2023 2:06:00 PM

Comparing the sun and man existence was magnificent, Mike. Good logic in answering no. I agree, each part of creation has their own unique challenges and blessings. Write On! my friend. Bill

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/15/2023 5:53:00 AM

Thank you Bill always for your kind words!!!

Valsa George

Date: 4/13/2023 10:17:00 PM

"It counters with its dusk and dawn Creating paintings of its own" Sun is a first rate artist creating beautiful paintings of dawn and dusk and is so powerful enough to dip the world in darkness and illumine it with light. But we needn't grow jealous of it as it too has to wage many battles against adversity like us ! Beautiful poem dear Mike.

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/14/2023 5:25:00 AM

Thank you Valsa, I always appreciate your kind and insightful comments!!! Happy Friday xxoo

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/9/2023 1:47:00 AM

Of course, you should not be jealous.

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/9/2023 7:52:00 AM

Thank you Victor!!

John Oldham

Date: 4/8/2023 4:49:00 PM

Another well written poem, Maestro! Love the simplicity of your poetry. Best - john

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/9/2023 7:52:00 AM

Thank you John!!

Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/8/2023 4:45:00 PM

Another charmed vision from your pen dear Mike ! I love the way your heart and mind express itself . I always learn things when reading your poems ! Big hugs , Susan :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/9/2023 7:53:00 AM

Coming from you, such a lovely and appreciated comment, thanks Susan xxoo

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/8/2023 9:14:00 AM

Very nice Mike. Flows so well. I enjoyed this. Happy Easter :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/8/2023 11:08:00 AM

Happy Easter Heidi, thank you xxoo

Jenna Logan

Date: 4/8/2023 9:04:00 AM

You've come to the right conclusion, Mike. It's the sun who is jealous of us, for although he warms us, he cannot do it with a touch or a breath. Wonderful verses, as always.

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/8/2023 11:08:00 AM

Thank you so much Jenna xxoo

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/8/2023 8:50:00 AM

One thing for sure Mike we'd be lost without it. Hope you have a happy Easter weekend. Tom

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/8/2023 11:07:00 AM

Happy Easter Tom, thank you!!!

Deb M

Date: 4/8/2023 8:34:00 AM

Hi Mike so glad to see your poem…l have missed them. I have to echo Vijays comment…l feel exactly the same! There is something about the way you write the beautifulness of your words that touches my heart! This poem is just lovely…..Debx

Mike Gentile
Date: 4/8/2023 11:09:00 AM

So kind of you to say, thanks Deb xxoo