Jealous

A Black Dress simple
Gains entry to ample
Fun places of Rich
and People Beautiful.  

But careful,Naive
A glance lustful
will soon deceive.
Keep the intake
of Brain Fog
products,minimal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/14/2015 4:31:00 PM
Those "brain fog products" can make a shamble of thought and reasoning. Nicely composed; certainly has a well intended touch of allegory. Why have you called this "Jealous", Kieran? Anyhow, Happy Valentines Day! Mikki
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Kieran Pavlick
Date: 7/10/2017 1:22:00 PM
I believe their are men and women who try to fit in,because they are jealous of the lifestyles of the rich and famous. It blinds them to the hazards.
Date: 5/11/2013 9:26:00 PM
Kieran :-) Congratulations with having your poem Featured this week. Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda"
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Date: 10/29/2012 5:09:00 AM
Lovely admonition Kieran! In search of social acceptance we often dismiss our instincts for self protection. Well written piece!
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Kieran Pavlick
Date: 10/29/2012 11:31:00 AM
Thank You. Being a Great Grandfather of Five Boys, I study what the young are doing these days. Romance,Love Sex, are still the same since the beginning.
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