Jaws Just Turned Fifty
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"You're gonna need a bigger boat." best scene in Jaws. The best scene of my life was my first experience at the ocean. I brought my grands recently, to the same beach, but the riptides were a bit too much. So that was their first experience. One of them was fourteen and was thrilled to think to live in such a way. This year he is a lifeguard.
My daughter, not their mother, climbed the sand dunes of Oahu, trying to get away from the waves. Some love...some hate, but the ocean affects us all.
Happy Summer!
The salty wind tans my face, smile
for miles of shoreline. My feet ecstatic
to dip and go into the ebb and flow.
I didn’t know it then, how time flies;
so glad, so free, so liberating. Just
a child running into Melbourne arms.
She’s nine, this person I remember.
I only remember pure happiness.
It is addressed E V E R Y time
I hear the swoosh, feel hot sun,
smell the coconut air. N E V E R
afraid of sharks, my cousins, lovingly
warned me of. I couldn’t have cared less.
All the foamy joy of the tides lifting me
higher and higher into ecstasy. Dance
of fluidity. Later, I’d watch Jaws, but
not for another five years…fearless,
collecting shells; Auntie Elaine still
living, telling me to glue onto velvet
Florida F O R E V E R keepsakes.
My granddaughters, would move
and swim in this space, I occupied
so many years before. I stand
knee deep, sandals kicked off,
while my daughter, and hers,
wait at the car. You couldn’t keep
me from this cherry picked memory.
The beachy wind in my face. Miles
and miles of shoreline. Coconut
and salt, swooshing of ebb and flow.
Jaws just turned fifty and I’m still
riding the highs of possibilities.
Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2025
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