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"You're gonna need a bigger boat." best scene in Jaws. The best scene of my life was my first experience at the ocean. I brought my grands recently, to the same beach, but the riptides were a bit too much. So that was their first experience. One of them was fourteen and was thrilled to think to live in such a way. This year he is a lifeguard. 

My daughter, not their mother, climbed the sand dunes of Oahu, trying to get away from the waves. Some love...some hate, but the ocean affects us all.

Happy Summer!

The salty wind tans my face, smile for miles of shoreline. My feet ecstatic to dip and go into the ebb and flow. I didn’t know it then, how time flies; so glad, so free, so liberating. Just a child running into Melbourne arms. She’s nine, this person I remember. I only remember pure happiness. It is addressed E V E R Y time I hear the swoosh, feel hot sun, smell the coconut air. N E V E R afraid of sharks, my cousins, lovingly warned me of. I couldn’t have cared less. All the foamy joy of the tides lifting me higher and higher into ecstasy. Dance of fluidity. Later, I’d watch Jaws, but not for another five years…fearless, collecting shells; Auntie Elaine still living, telling me to glue onto velvet Florida F O R E V E R keepsakes. My granddaughters, would move and swim in this space, I occupied so many years before. I stand knee deep, sandals kicked off, while my daughter, and hers, wait at the car. You couldn’t keep me from this cherry picked memory. The beachy wind in my face. Miles and miles of shoreline. Coconut and salt, swooshing of ebb and flow. Jaws just turned fifty and I’m still riding the highs of possibilities.

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Date: 6/23/2025 8:56:00 AM
Beauteous write Kim. I grew up on Long Island and loved going to Fire Island and Montauk. I remember 50 years ago standing in a long line to see "Jaws". Quite a harrowing movie. One of the most moving parts of the movie was when Capt. Quint talked of the USS Indianapolis tragedy. Your poem is a FAV. xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/23/2025 9:03:00 AM
Oh thank you so much! Hugs
Date: 6/22/2025 11:27:00 AM
Creative work about getting older with children, grandchildren, etc. I remember jaws which was a very scary movie to me. Well, even say terrifying movie. I prefer not to go in the ocean anymore except maybe to wet my feet and that would be enough. LOL..Sara K
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2025 7:44:00 PM
It is always possible. Be ready for warnings. Perhaps we get more fearful as we get older. Hugs and thanks!
Date: 6/21/2025 9:27:00 PM
Gotta share this with you. I read the title, 'Jaws Just Turned Fifty,' and thought: 'Hmm. Kim is now, gulp, 60. How is it that her jaws have just turned 50? Did she refrain from speaking for 10 years? lol. Oh, well. Amusing musings, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/22/2025 10:51:00 AM
If you knew me well, well you would know I do jabber on. Perhaps those first 15 years (I was shy) were a little quieter, but no one would accuse me of that as I inch toward 65. A senior in high school…nay, a senior citizen (now is that anyway to speak to me) LOL!
Date: 6/21/2025 4:33:00 PM
I enjoyed the reflective nature of this personable poem. There's something almost alluring about the beach and the ocean. enjoy your weekend, yellow rose
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2025 5:34:00 PM
Yes, it has a healing power! Hugs and thank you, dear one!
Date: 6/21/2025 9:52:00 AM
Your "Jaws Just Turned Fifty" is a creative/fun write. Love It... "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a fun/blessed day writing away...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2025 5:32:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! Have a fun time writing, my friend!
Date: 6/21/2025 9:02:00 AM
Some beautiful memoirs. Like how time fast-forwards and goes back- a really awe inspiring piece, dear Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/21/2025 5:31:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!

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