Javelin

From prehistoric stone there was sharpened a point then a spike:
chiselled and engraved and hoisted and thrust,
raised high above men toward a target lofty, afar in a field.

Competitors rose from primordial waters, 
harpooning dreams and dripping ambition,
tired and bruised but practiced and hopeful.

Javelin was once rock was once bone was once wood
is now painted is now plastic - from caveman to athlete
from mammoth beater to medal winner.

From grey pebble there became arrow,
from misstep there became podium
and a golden first-place pedestal.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Kendrick Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 7:20 AM
Creative and expressive work. The topic is very unique as well. Congrats on your win. Sara
Fowler Avatar
October 21, 2020 at 6:37 AM
Very nicely penned Thomas. Congratulations on the win! Linda
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 20, 2020 at 3:34 PM
Wondrous symbolisms throughout, Thomas, your accentuated skills are remarkable, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Mcgee Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 9:14 PM
Creative write about Javelin. congrats on your placement.
Harper Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 8:55 PM
Congratulations on your 6th place win in the Invitation to Play Contest, Thomas. I like your playful use of material and history and round about way of come back to the topic of a contest and play, enjoyed reading it.
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