Jasmine Rose

Rapt in the familiar fragrance, jasmine rose, the allure of its passionate quintessence swirling full circle to its enchanting close. I smiled, the flower mimicking your essence presumed itself a suitable contestant against power of which you are attestant. Not today, nor lifetime, can flowers compare to the bewitchment of your hypnotic air.
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Kendrick Avatar
March 14, 2024 at 2:35 PM
I like this one. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
March 15, 2024 at 7:02 AM
Any thanks Sara. Good to see you. I appreciate your positivity. :)
Eslinger Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 7:47 AM
You got a Wow from me herei want to know this person. After reading I thought, “I want to be that person.” A totally involving poem for me. One of my fave scents, too. even before the last line as I thought,”
Fowler Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 7:57 AM
Many thanks for your kind visit and comments Sally. Always a pleasure to see you. Welcome back! :)
Andresen Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 7:04 AM
- Beautiful rose, Linda :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 7:37 AM
Good afternoon Anne-Lise. I hope all is well with you. Thanks for visiting! hugs :)
Horne Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 2:24 PM
beautifully written - I could almost smell it
Fowler Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 2:53 PM
Hey Jack. Nice to see you! Thanks for the great comment. I always enjoy being able to elicit a positive response. :)
Dome Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 11:38 AM
Wow. I could smell this. A very clever and smelly poem. Well done. Pete,
Fowler Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 11:59 AM
LOL Pette. Better smelly than stinky (I guess?)! Thanks for visiting. :)
Volumes Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 10:52 PM
Beautiful Laf I smell it all the way to Downunder. A delightful poem my friend
Fowler Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 7:17 AM
Wow, that's a long way from Texas! Heeheeheehee. Thanks for your continued friendship and support dear Wen. laf :)
Empress Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 2:33 PM
How beautiful is this, i love the way you’ve delivered this rispetto dear linda: jasmine rose sounds so fragrant and gorgeous, and i love your rhymes especially love the lines “ Not today, nor lifetime, can flowers compare to the bewitchment of your hypnotic air.” So deep and soulful. Pleasure reading always your work: sending you light always
Fowler Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 7:15 AM
Hello Inky. Thank you for your thoughtful comments. :)
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