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Jasmine Rose

Rapt in the familiar fragrance, jasmine rose, the allure of its passionate quintessence swirling full circle to its enchanting close. I smiled, the flower mimicking your essence presumed itself a suitable contestant against power of which you are attestant. Not today, nor lifetime, can flowers compare to the bewitchment of your hypnotic air.

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Date: 3/14/2024 2:35:00 PM
I like this one. If for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/15/2024 7:02:00 AM
Any thanks Sara. Good to see you. I appreciate your positivity. :)
Date: 3/12/2024 7:47:00 AM
You got a Wow from me herei want to know this person. After reading I thought, “I want to be that person.” A totally involving poem for me. One of my fave scents, too. even before the last line as I thought,”
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/12/2024 7:57:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind visit and comments Sally. Always a pleasure to see you. Welcome back! :)
Date: 3/12/2024 7:04:00 AM
- Beautiful rose, Linda :) - hugs
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/12/2024 7:37:00 AM
Good afternoon Anne-Lise. I hope all is well with you. Thanks for visiting! hugs :)
Date: 3/11/2024 2:24:00 PM
beautifully written - I could almost smell it
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/11/2024 2:53:00 PM
Hey Jack. Nice to see you! Thanks for the great comment. I always enjoy being able to elicit a positive response. :)
Date: 3/11/2024 11:38:00 AM
Wow. I could smell this. A very clever and smelly poem. Well done. Pete,
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/11/2024 11:59:00 AM
LOL Pette. Better smelly than stinky (I guess?)! Thanks for visiting. :)
Date: 3/10/2024 10:52:00 PM
Beautiful Laf I smell it all the way to Downunder. A delightful poem my friend
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/11/2024 7:17:00 AM
Wow, that's a long way from Texas! Heeheeheehee. Thanks for your continued friendship and support dear Wen. laf :)
Date: 3/10/2024 4:55:00 PM
not sure I've ever seen a jasmine rose, but you've described it beautifully in your Rispetto. I loved this line: the allure of its passionate quintessence...your rhyme scheme was superb; wonderful Rispetto. For the contest???? have a great evening, Sara
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/11/2024 7:16:00 AM
Thank you dear Sara. I appreciate the positivity. Yes, for the contest. :)
Date: 3/10/2024 2:33:00 PM
How beautiful is this, i love the way you’ve delivered this rispetto dear linda: jasmine rose sounds so fragrant and gorgeous, and i love your rhymes especially love the lines “ Not today, nor lifetime, can flowers compare to the bewitchment of your hypnotic air.” So deep and soulful. Pleasure reading always your work: sending you light always
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/11/2024 7:15:00 AM
Hello Inky. Thank you for your thoughtful comments. :)

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