Jasmine

Going around being as mean as I can be
She doesn't know it but she brings out the good in me
She is so beautiful man she is such a sight to see
Damn she is so close to perfect 
There is no way she could like me
When she talks its like angels singing in my ear
I am usually paranoid but with her I have no fear
She can soothe my tears
Cure the pain I have felt for years and years
So should I give into my fears
Or should I try to get her
Because no matter how good I am
She makes me better
Maybe I should write her a letter
Maybe I should write her a note
Maybe I should tell her how I feel
No she will think I am a joke
What do I do I am so confused
One side of me is telling me to ask her
The other side is saying "she deserves better than you"
I know that is true 
What do I do
I know what I want
But I can't do that
If I just walked up to her and kissed her
Well that is a good way to get slapped
So how do you tell someone you can't breathe
How do you tell someone you can't focus
Never mind it is hopeless
I need to wash away the possibility in the next rain  shower
I can't be thinking of someone hour after hour
I can only dream to have us as a memory
All the while I can't breathe
In my mind I see us walking hand in hand on the beach
There is so much she can teach
I see so much in her eyes
I see all truth and no lies
Oh my god look how time flies
When I see her my heartbeat starts to rise
Along with my desire to take off this disguise 
She is the queen of the night, the day, the skies
If I ask her maybe she will give me a huge surprise

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/2/2009 4:53:00 AM
Interesting write. Is it a topic or a life situation? If life do you have a mutual friend? Get that mutual friend to introduce the two of you. Welcome to soup and keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/1/2009 10:31:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Nathan. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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