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Jasmine

"Thanks for watching over me, your scent brings back memories of my childhood." quote by poet 

Sweet winsome scent croon through spring 
within dense forest nature in a respite rest, 
beneath brightening sky; flowers take wing
in brisk surfing dance reviving kiss in a vivid dream. 

Enchanting white blooming jasmine vines 
waltzing, embroidering through trellis-work. 
Its inspiration graceful elegance of beauty 
and wafting scent essence of love. 

Daydreams of poetry it makes.

1/3/2023

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Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/5/2024 10:26:00 AM I love jasmine, the fragrance, the simple, graceful flowers. I have winter jasmine, purchased thinking they were summer jasmine LOL And they bloom beautifully sunshiny yellow. This is just gorgeous! Congratulations dear Eve! :) Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 1/5/2024 2:56:00 AM Ahi love jasmines! And how beautiful is this. The way you’ve woven words and your way with articulating lines has a mellifluous touch to the rhythm i especially loved “ Enchanting white blooming jasmine vines waltzing, embroidering through trellis-work. “ i see through your fragrant words! Pleasure reading this. Congratulations on your well deserved win too Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 1/4/2024 12:57:00 PM Sounds lovely Eve.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.. Login to Reply

Sotto Poet Date: 1/4/2024 11:57:00 AM Your poem is truly exceptional, my dear friend, Eve. The profound beauty and elegance of that final line are truly captivating. I hope that you are in good health and spirits. Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 1/4/2024 11:26:00 AM So beautiful and lovely that last line is.. Hope you are well.. Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/4/2024 1:20:00 AM Almost like dope. The fragrance will send you to heaven. Hugs. Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 1/4/2024 8:49:00 AM Thank you , my friend. Hope you are doing well.

Hiya Sharma Date: 1/3/2024 6:59:00 PM Oh my, firstly I must FAV this ethereal poem and now, woww.This poem made me waltz in seraphic scents of flowers and glide on the glorious fragrances of jasmines, melting in their saccharine croons.I too, have so many memories related with this flower. Earlier, in my garden we used to have jasmines,roses,plumerias,marigold and many others and I often used to go to my jasmines before going to school..Ahh, this poem took me on a journey, dear Eve..my morning has become beautiful after reading this Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 1/4/2024 8:48:00 AM Thank you so much for the fav. and your wonderful encouraging compliment. There are just some fragrances that just takes you back to a moment in life. Many blessings to you Hiya Sharma Date: 1/3/2024 7:01:00 PM "Daydreams of poetry it makes" Indeed very true!! I absolutely loved reading this, purely magical.. Sending you love, light and many best wishes~ :)