Jasmine

jasmine
adorned her
bridal bouquet ...
grieving groom puts blooms on
coffin

Writing challenge 1 May 2019 Cinqku Poetry contest
Sponsored by Dear Heart

5/9/19

deathfuneralsad loveweddingcinqku

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Sandra Haight

May 18, 2019 at 5:41 PM

Such a sad turn in your well-written Cinqku, Jan! Congratulations on your well-deserved Podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Connie Marcum Wong

May 14, 2019 at 12:09 PM

Your first place is so deserving with this emotive entry Jan. Beautifully crafted! Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo

Constance La France

May 14, 2019 at 9:50 AM

Jan congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent and emotional poem !

Paul Callus

May 14, 2019 at 5:49 AM

Back with congratulations, Jan! A merited top spot!! Hugs // paul

Ann Gilmour

May 14, 2019 at 3:37 AM

Coming back with many congrats for your top win Jan - beautiful! Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 14, 2019 at 3:35 AM

- A lovely poem, Jan ... congratulations on a great place on the winning list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May

May 13, 2019 at 6:33 PM

Very moving Jan...Congrats on your win..

Jan Allison

May 14, 2019 at 1:06 AM

Thanks Joseph I enjoyed the challenge of a form I rarely write:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

May 13, 2019 at 6:23 PM

This is so touching, Jan. Congrats for the win.

Jan Allison

May 14, 2019 at 1:06 AM

thanks Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

May 12, 2019 at 3:33 PM

How very sad this is, Jan! A Cinqku which pulls at our heartstrings. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison

May 14, 2019 at 1:06 AM

thanks Paul I'll be in touch need to catch up:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

May 11, 2019 at 5:18 PM

Hi Jan, You have penned such a sad and poignant write. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

May 14, 2019 at 1:05 AM

Thanks Alexis, sorry for the delay in replying :-) hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi

May 10, 2019 at 7:37 PM

I am in awe of this poem, Jan. Indirect sadness and love.

Jan Allison

May 14, 2019 at 1:05 AM

Thanks so much Ralph, being at the cancer hospital for a wkk has made my muse more serious:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour

May 10, 2019 at 2:40 AM

A beautiful, poignant write Jan, good luck in the contest and good to see you on PS again. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

May 14, 2019 at 1:01 AM

Thanks so much Ann sorry for the late reply - i had very limited internet access last week when I was with hubby at the cancer hospital, he is back there I am now home will just see him most weekends:-) hugs Jan xx

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