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Jars

Flasks and drums
Vases and urns
Barrels for holding pickles

Bowls and cups
Pots and pans
Piggy banks for nickles

Beakers, pitchers
Bottles for milk
Mere vessels for the rookies!

For no container
In the world
Can beat my jar of cookies!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/30/2012 3:58:00 PM
a lovely poem! congratulations on your win in the contest!
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Date: 1/30/2012 4:52:00 AM
Great synopsis on jars, Michelle! Nice use of rhyme..Congrats on this win! Gwendolen
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Date: 1/30/2012 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations Michelle x
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Date: 1/29/2012 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Michelle. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/29/2012 12:02:00 AM
Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. You have both great descriptiveness and rhyming in this offering.
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Date: 1/28/2012 11:23:00 PM
A great one. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 1/28/2012 7:17:00 PM
I LOVE IT. YOu have taken the topic and done it perfectly, Michelle. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:31:00 PM
Amen to that Michelle. Good point. Congratulations
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:30:00 PM
Michelle congrats on your win..David
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:15:00 PM
Thank you so much!
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Date: 1/28/2012 12:10:00 PM
congrats michelle on a super second place win for this poem on jars luv..
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