Michelle Prital Poet Rhyme

Jars

Flasks and drums
Vases and urns
Barrels for holding pickles

Bowls and cups
Pots and pans
Piggy banks for nickles

Beakers, pitchers
Bottles for milk
Mere vessels for the rookies!

For no container
In the world
Can beat my jar of cookies!

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Ilene Bauer January 30, 2012 at 3:58 PM a lovely poem! congratulations on your win in the contest!

Gwendolen Song January 30, 2012 at 4:52 AM Great synopsis on jars, Michelle! Nice use of rhyme..Congrats on this win! Gwendolen

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 30, 2012 at 3:19 AM Congratulations Michelle x

Carol Sunshine Brown January 29, 2012 at 10:50 AM Congratulations on your win in Susan's "JARS" contest Michelle. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit January 29, 2012 at 12:02 AM Congratulations on winning with this fine entry. You have both great descriptiveness and rhyming in this offering.

Joyce Johnson January 28, 2012 at 11:23 PM A great one. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich January 28, 2012 at 7:17 PM I LOVE IT. YOu have taken the topic and done it perfectly, Michelle. Congrats on your win.

Bob Quigley January 28, 2012 at 12:31 PM Amen to that Michelle. Good point. Congratulations

David Williams January 28, 2012 at 12:30 PM Michelle congrats on your win..David

Michelle Prital January 28, 2012 at 12:15 PM Thank you so much!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 28, 2012 at 12:10 PM congrats michelle on a super second place win for this poem on jars luv..