Jarheads In a Pickle



War ain’t a kosher thing
The killing of innocent human beings
was never FDA approved
(From Da Almighty)

Ebenezer fiscals’ hands be closed tighty
	to the citizen poor
But they openly solicit those laborers’ loyalty,
before sending them off to war

Dem silver-loving Scrooges 
were publican greedy Re-schooled
Roman togas playing hooky pocket pool

Coin-operated Caesar stooges
         are nod-and-wink
leveraging voter ears to be ballot fooled

Patriotic cash registers cha-ching jingling, 
be heavy gold chains saber rattling
around their Faustian necks
For covetous J.I. chicken scratch eyes
love taking thirty more pecks
  
Warlords of the widow doorbell rings,
send their grave messengers
with the Silver Star death notice:
Crimson ink printed on 
official government green leaves

Shallow-breathing, solemn feudal shoguns
sweetly give the veiled bereaved
a sepulchre stipend of le papier viol worms

Sour tastings   ...   dog tags confirmed
	Napalm tear stings,
paid valor that was battlefield earned

Jarheads in a pickle —
power-mad orders gotta be followed
It’s treasonous to question 
any chain-of-command authority

Shed the innocent blood,
then spill the guts 
in hollow bullet grunt cries 
for atonement

While the rich instigators of destruction,
never repent for owning it

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/27/2018 5:30:00 PM
You have a way with words. Powerful ending too :)
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Date: 8/27/2018 2:21:00 PM
Love the title.
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Date: 8/27/2018 1:48:00 PM
the rhythm is always defining and your phrasing is high complex : )
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Date: 8/27/2018 1:41:00 PM
written with depth using a bit of sarcasm and slam for war's darn consequences all countries seem to justify... greeat job, freddie...huggs
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