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January Wind

You shift the autumn breeze, again, you creep into the wind. To crawl beneath my skin, again, as winter's chill seeps in. Your absence fills the air, again, and wraps my world with ice. It taunts and toys with time, again— It stretches sleepless nights. My layers fail to shield, again, against the coming breeze. And I am left exposed, again, to every gust it breathes. I'm captured by the cold, again— I drift with winter wind, A blow that brings me back, and then I watch you fade, again.

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Date: 2/19/2025 1:10:00 AM
An excellent poem Jessica that flows beautifully. Thanks for sharing. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 1/20/2025 11:21:00 AM
glad i came across this - the brevity and repetition gives this an intriguing tension - well expressed
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Date: 1/12/2025 8:57:00 PM
You captured it well, and put me right outside to feel the winds wrath. It is very well written indeed. I'll fav.
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Date: 1/12/2025 11:24:00 AM
Awesome writing. love it. God bless you, always, love, Gina
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Date: 1/12/2025 9:22:00 AM
I loved this - just beautiful
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Date: 1/10/2025 3:36:00 PM
I love the metaphor and feel of this poem, Jessica. Well done -
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Jessica Wheeler
Date: 1/20/2025 12:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, John!

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