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January Mood

A foggy, foggy day in January town, Gripping its pray like tiger claws, Sullen, spreading its eerie fears To those behind wintered walls. Finally, through its misted barrier, Sunshine pierces her first nature’s needle. A splash of warmth finds an upturned cheek, And the world awakens with hope.

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Heidi Sands

Date: 1/14/2018 9:08:00 AM

Very well written. I can relate to this with the weather here! Nice last ending to your poem :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/12/2018 10:33:00 AM

i like how you perceived january through your poetic heart, sun... so lovely.. huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/11/2018 9:57:00 AM

Sunlite Wanter, I'm kind of having the same moon. January seems to have so many barriers. Love your write, Now, I'll just wait for my sunshine. LINDA

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 1/14/2018 12:25:00 PM

You were one of the first to encourage me when I got in PS. Thank you for your comment.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/10/2018 1:39:00 PM

Perfect depiction of a day in January but also of a glimpse of hope that appears with the sun's rays -promising Spring! Well written dear, S.W.

Silent One

Date: 1/10/2018 6:17:00 AM

Typical January in winter.. the sun is out today though..