Andy Richards Poet Haiku

January Designs

January Designs 

            resolution time
 last year, waist did not decline             
         this year less I’ll dine    

            resolution time
   last year, love I did not find
      this year she'll be mine

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  for January Two Haiku Contest

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Saba Khan June 8, 2014 at 11:48 PM Congratulations :)

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 7:39 PM thank you for the reply..:)

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 5:44 PM Awesome win...Linda Andy Richards June 8, 2014 at 5:55 PM Thank you Linda!

Paul Callus June 8, 2014 at 2:11 PM Lovely set Andy! Good luck with your love life :) Congrats on your win. // paul Andy Richards June 8, 2014 at 5:55 PM thanks!

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2014 at 10:24 AM LOVE this set of haiku. The first one particularly because I can relate to it. Love how you did rhyming too. congrats. Andy Richards June 8, 2014 at 5:55 PM I appreciate your kind words..

Dr.Ram Mehta June 8, 2014 at 9:39 AM Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, andy Andy Richards June 8, 2014 at 5:54 PM tnanks!

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 8:35 AM ANDY, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT Andy Richards June 8, 2014 at 5:54 PM you're welcome!

Nette Onclaud May 20, 2014 at 12:45 PM i only fulfill my resolutions half-way, andy... a gorgeous set of haiku!.. huggs Andy Richards June 8, 2014 at 5:54 PM ty..

Carolyn Devonshire May 18, 2014 at 4:11 PM Hi Andy, These are very clever! Many of us make resolutions, but few of us keep them. I'm working on "dining less" again this year...as always. LOL Carolyn Andy Richards May 18, 2014 at 5:06 PM Thank you for the compliment!

Barbara Gorelick May 17, 2014 at 10:42 PM smiling..BG Andy Richards May 18, 2014 at 12:12 AM smiling at your smiles.. your welcome!