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  Mahkota, Frost, Pohon, Musim Dingin

- January -

A freezing cold evening

Where the stars shining bright

With frost blade flanks

From mouth and nose steam

In the clear silence

White untrodden snows

Nature's frozen pulse

Sleep like a little baby

One gracious moon

After the night the light is shattered into gold

At sunrise raise your heartbeat








03.01.2016 A-L Andresen :)
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Raven Avatar
February 3, 2016 at 3:32 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, January is a dream of a write. It can touch the Soul with such Crystalline delight. Your soft words paint such a wonderful picture Anne-Lise, one can easily see your winter painting. January comes and a new year begins. Your words sing, may they always sing Anne-Thus us a canvas i would ever like to see....Vladislav.
Andresen Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 4:48 AM
- Vladislav, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 1:55 PM
The picture looks like us these past few weeks. Looks so pretty when the trees are decorated with frost. Lovely poem. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
January 12, 2016 at 2:01 PM
- Pretty but cold, dear friend :) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rigoler Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 10:37 PM
Bonjour, guten tag! J'aime pas du tout la neige. Ich hasse das schnee! But your description is beautiful. Hallo! Håper du er godt og nyter det nye året. Takk for at du leser min dikt. / M
Andresen Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 5:20 AM
- Thanks, Maurice :) ..... mange takk ..... jeg takker deg .... tusen takk ..... takk fra mitt hjerte :)))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Laurie Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 9:54 PM
Hello Anne Lise ... as it is quite warm here I can only shiver at the thought of how cold it must be, reading your picture poem Anne Lise - Lindsay
Andresen Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 6:08 AM
- Lindsay, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 6:18 AM
That line when your mouth and nose steam, oh what a vision. Nice poem Anne.
Andresen Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 6:25 AM
- .... and tears in my eyes because of the cold and biting wind ...... brrrrrrr ....... - Thanks, Scott - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 6:02 PM
Beautiful.
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 2:23 AM
- Thanks, Jean - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Martin Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Enjoyed so much. Wonderful imagery!
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 2:23 AM
- Thomas, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 3:03 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..It is very descriptive..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 2:22 AM
- Sara, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Petersen Potter Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 11:24 PM
Hi Anne- Lise!Very beautifully painted picture of January here my dear friend. Excellent winter poem!A7! Sending you love and prayers.Wishing you a very lovely day! In his light God bless you always!:)Hugs!D.
Andresen Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 4:32 AM
- Thank you, Dorian :) - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 11:42 AM
may the first days of new year bless you more, anne.. huggs!
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 11:52 AM
- Thanks, Nette - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Daniel Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 10:00 AM
Thank you for encouraging..hugs to you too and a Happy New Year...
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 11:26 AM
- Joanna, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - Happy New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wigley Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:29 AM
I'm sure that where you live, at this time of year time must seen to stop and hang, still.... A lovely write, Anne Lise. Viv x
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 8:21 AM
- It's cold on the toes and the nose, Viv :)) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 4:50 AM
This poem is simply beautiful Anne Lise. Your imagery is divine! #7
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 5:05 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:20 AM
Anne Lise, delightful imageries.!~ hugs and smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:40 AM
- Olive, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Duggan Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 6:27 PM
What a beautiful little poem Anne Lise, what I wouldn't do for just a little taste of you weather right now, I really loved this little verse, hope you are well and happy new year, take care.........Vera
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:40 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Vera :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 5:54 PM
A longing look at a moment of reflection as one encompasses the grandeur of nature and our place within it. Emile.
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:39 AM
- Emile, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bickerstaffe Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 4:53 PM
What A delicious description of the year's first month! 'the light is shattered into gold,' what a lovely phrase! BRAVO Anne. Besr wishes, Keith
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:39 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Keith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Muideen Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 2:53 PM
Wow! Beautiful of nature depicts within your write. Excellent piece. I love reading nature's poem.........A.M.
Andresen Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 3:39 AM
- Afolabi, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Beautiful picture with beautiful words crafted a nice poem. Loved always my lovely friend,bl
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 12:01 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sage Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Nice write Anne...
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 12:02 PM
- Thanks W.S. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 7:05 AM
Your poem makes spring jealous of January, dear Anee-Lise! Beautiful!
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 7:22 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Shahein Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 7:28 PM
Beautiful poem with beautiful words , great choice for the words you've pictured a lovely image in my head , beautiful description of the month....hugs / / :) dalia
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 7:26 AM
- Dalia, thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 5:33 PM
Lovely poem on this month of January! I rarely find such nice things to say about this month!
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 7:26 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Andrea - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Nunez Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Loved the "nature's frozen pulse". Recently, I've read an autobiography where the author visited your country, Anne. His description of its unique beauty made me think of you and your poetry. So lovely... hugs!
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2016 at 7:25 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, dear Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Your January imagery is beautiful, Anne Lise! ... and I can hear that heartbeat:) You have snow...we are still enjoying sunshine and nice weather! Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 1:32 PM
- Lucky you are ............ here is freezing - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments, Paul - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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