Aiyah Torres Poet Haiku

January

brand new calendar,
                           gate opens new beginning,
                                 the world celebrates.


                                 deep family bonding,
                        thick rice cakes and firecrackers,
                                 fire dragon dancing.

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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 9, 2014 at 7:02 AM :) you make me remember two new years away form home.. :D love the 2nd one more..:D kudos!

Saba Khan June 8, 2014 at 11:46 PM Congrats :)

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 5:45 PM Congratulations, sweet friend. ..Linda

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2014 at 10:21 AM I love that second one and the description of family getting together and the dragon dancing. Congrats.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 8, 2014 at 9:37 AM Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Aiyah

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 8:35 AM Aiyah, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT

Roy Jerden May 26, 2014 at 5:46 PM I particularly enjoyed the second one. Well done! Cheers, Roy

Paul Callus May 24, 2014 at 8:09 AM Love both haiku, AiyaH, though if pressed I would go for the second...I sense an eastern atmosphere. gl. // paul Paul Callus June 8, 2014 at 1:54 PM Congratulations on a merited win. :)

James Fraser May 20, 2014 at 4:07 PM January to January, the opening of New Years. Where families grow and grow, and erode the pasts tears and fears. Nice poem, thanks for sharing, James :)

Jake Ponce May 13, 2014 at 7:35 PM I felt the warmth of family bonds after reading it. Aiyah Torres May 14, 2014 at 7:14 AM wow! ..thanks Jake.. That's pretty cool.. :O)

Andrea Dietrich May 13, 2014 at 8:21 AM these are DELIGHTFUL!!!! Aiyah Torres May 13, 2014 at 9:20 AM Thank you, Andrea!! :O)

Jim Tidd May 13, 2014 at 7:59 AM Nice. Aiyah Torres May 13, 2014 at 9:20 AM thanks!! :O)

Anne-Lise Andresen May 13, 2014 at 7:47 AM - A January as January each year (? ? :) ? ? ) - Well done my friend Aiyah! - Good luck in the contest! - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Aiyah Torres May 13, 2014 at 9:18 AM aww.. my dear Anne.. Thank you for commenting on my poem.. :O)) I miss you!! ^_^

David Williams May 13, 2014 at 2:46 AM Aiyah great image, I like it...David Aiyah Torres May 13, 2014 at 7:45 AM Hi David... Thanks for dropping by!! :O))

Deborah Shiells May 12, 2014 at 3:52 PM Hi Aiyah, Loved this. Happy and bright. Thank you for sharing this write with us. Peace, Deborah Aiyah Torres May 12, 2014 at 3:59 PM Thanks a lot, dear Deb!! ^_^