Jerry T Curtis Poet Rhyme

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Jan's World

When life seems all backed up
with pressers all around
I slip into the bathroom
and let my trousers down
It's private and so quiet
and I like the cool white seat
with my back against the porcelain 
it's quite a soothing treat
Now, once I'm all relaxed
I reach for stuff to read
And somewhere through Jan's poetry
I do my dirty deed
 
They say that Michelangelo saw his sculptures in a block of marble before he started carving---God only knows what Jan sees in a round porcelain bowl to inspirer her to write phoop!   LOL   Jan, God Bess

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Bawa Talwar May 11, 2017 at 8:16 PM never came across such a funny subject for poetry .its marvelous. so informal anybody can relate to it. kindly review my work as ive just joined soup

Gary Bateman March 29, 2017 at 6:16 PM Hello Jerry!! Congrats on POTD for this really humorous write. I know that Jan really loves this one -- as she should!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Eileen Manassian March 7, 2017 at 9:00 PM HA HA HA HA!!! Good one, Jerry. Congrats on this making it as POTD. Jan is an inspiration to all...and that's all I will say! Jerry T Curtis April 2, 2017 at 6:49 AM Thank you Eileen

Anne-Lise Andresen March 7, 2017 at 3:17 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Jerry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jerry T Curtis March 7, 2017 at 5:34 AM Thank You Sunshine

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 7, 2017 at 12:09 AM LOL...love it! Congrats on TPOD! Jerry T Curtis March 7, 2017 at 5:33 AM Thanks Ronda

Jan Allison March 6, 2017 at 6:02 PM I am honoured that you have been honoured with poem of the day - it should have been Poem of the year its so darn funny! Many congrats jerry Jerry T Curtis March 7, 2017 at 5:32 AM Jan Thank you again ----Jan The only honor I really enjoy is when I hear you have peed you pants---lol

Agnes Krampe March 6, 2017 at 1:04 PM What an unusual tribute - I am sure Jan will smile at this :) Jerry T Curtis March 7, 2017 at 5:29 AM Thank you Agnes, I will take that as a complement---Unusual Tribute to and Unusual Lady

Darren White March 6, 2017 at 12:46 PM Aaahhhh, this made me laugh so hard! Jan inspires so many people to dirty deeds hahaha. I love this. Wonderful PotD, best tribute ever Jan Allison March 7, 2017 at 4:31 PM You saying my poems are poop or are just fit to be read on the loo Darren - woohoooo lol:-) hugs Jan xx Jerry T Curtis March 7, 2017 at 5:35 AM Thank you very much Darren--yeah Jan is great

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 6, 2017 at 9:42 AM Back to congrat! ;) xomo Jerry T Curtis March 7, 2017 at 5:36 AM Thanks again MM xoxo back at you

Charlie Smith March 6, 2017 at 6:40 AM A fitting tribute and quite an appropriate way to start the day, congratulations Jerry on POTD honors. I feel relieved... Jerry T Curtis March 7, 2017 at 5:38 AM Thanks Charlie You can go now----just kidding

Alexis Y. March 6, 2017 at 5:15 AM Lol! This is funny! Congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-)Alexis

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart March 5, 2017 at 10:48 AM Oh a fabulous dedication write! Lol ;) Jerry T Curtis March 7, 2017 at 5:23 AM Thanks Maureen we are so lucky to have Jan in the soup with us.

Tim Smith March 5, 2017 at 8:20 AM Very sweet...you were a handsome boy Jerry T Curtis March 7, 2017 at 5:21 AM Thanks Timmy but I'm the weird looking kid in the tub---just kidding---Thanks for your comment Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 9:13 AM It's not called the reading room for nothing lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 7:13 AM Oh my word Jerry - laugh I think I'm going to have to start wearing a nappy lol - I am delighted my poop inspired you to write a blockbuster! Adding this to my faves its hilarious thank you:-) Hugs Jan xx Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 9:31 AM I now have a rhinestone crown from Flo - I must make sure I wear it in the throne room lol:-) hugs Jan xx