Janky Boots

Janky boots, walk me through this poverty painted stream
While water laughs its way through my busted seam
My feet are cold and unprotected
But I still walk to my next taste of your nostalgic sunbeam
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Salehi Avatar
May 26, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Hello Jenny, the term rubayiat is the plural of Rubai. Yours is a single rubai. Also, a Rubai should be spiritual ormystical rather than secular and worldly... Pashang
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October 27, 2016 at 2:50 PM
Very good.... Skat...
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October 25, 2016 at 2:54 PM
Flourishing Flow***pd
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October 21, 2016 at 3:06 AM
Tempting Janky Boots of the Fancy`s Fairy who runs barefooted in the grass of the dawns...As you met and embraced her...Best wishes
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