Jan Allison
I sought the best
To win this contest
I wanted it done Judy's way.
I needed to know if I fit the bill;
And could write what she wanted it to say.
I used a form,
Which was not my norm
And stumbled upon mistakes
But on the scene was my Queen
And she was there for my sake.
She viewed my spews,
And told me what to do.
In her review
She found a few
That I needed to correct.
She was gentle with her words;
Didn't make me feel like a reject.
And through it all when it was done
I came out on top, I am (#1) one.
I found a friend across the water
And she is worth more than a quarter;
She is worthy of her call
She has that influence to bring out greatness
And she is willing to do if for you all.
Thanks Jan I know you can.
Penned 12:50p.m. 4/7/2015.
Copyright © Daisy Marie Yant | Year Posted 2015
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