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just one of those days

Jan 26 77 Evening and Dawning

The flowing fire of day
Melted into the night
High o'er head the moon was out
Showing only half its light.

Dates made before this moment
Kept past their passing
Each a gem concentrically strung
On threads of fragmentary Nows ,
Waiting to meet their weaver.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Austin Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 12:11 PM
I like "The threads of fragmentary nows? Congrats. daver
Martin Avatar
April 16, 2015 at 4:17 PM
So expressive, Jan . Really enjoyed it!
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