James Peranteau Poet Prose Poetry

James' Feminine

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amin
amine (i'm losing it people...lol; it's pronounced amin)
lin 
line(can one imagine, english lit teacherz, instructing their students to draw a 'lin', down the center uv their note pads) that's right, i spelled it lin, instead 
uv line <-long "i"
spin
spine(or, can i take the car for a spine)
win 
wine(i'm thirsty, may i have the flask uv win) <- ;)
pin
pine (i'm the cultivator uv pin nuts)
feminin<--- that's nin
feminine<-that's nine, long "i"

i speak english precious readerz, i'm still unto this day, confused with the english vocabulary, and i can't be coxed into believing, that the third syllable 
in feminine, iz not pronounced "nine"<-long "i" 
fem-i-nine. short i's are pronounced "i" az in, it
                 long i's are pronounced "i" az in, 'I' belong to her (did ;) 
                 Iodine, turpentine...thank Yahweh i do, in
Yeshua's name, for; "poetic license", whut would i do dear poets!

Therefore, for those who indulge mine writes, know that...
"james' "feminine" iz pronounced, "fem-i-nine" az in #'9' 
i should have shared this, long ago....much luv, me ;)

                                   "This Spring"
                                       spoke i
                                          to 
                                  mine feminine

                                        whom

                                  mine feminine

                                "would marriage 
                                cause yourn sing" 

                                  "cross the t's
                                  and dot the i's" 
                          'fore i close for the night
                                    mine eyne"

                                       "yes"
                                    said shez
                                       "yes
                                        yes"
                                     "it's yes"
                                     "it's yes"

                                  And off went
                                  theirn green
                            mine Winter dreamz
                                      
                             dream after dream
                                   after dream 


          ;)

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Jeff Connelly September 19, 2023 at 3:10 AM Hi James. I'd make a comment with substance, but after reading some of your other poems and comments, see that you don't reply; so what's the point. Thanks Jeff Connelly September 30, 2023 at 12:58 AM Thanks for the advice, James. Truly appreciated. Hugs James Peranteau September 29, 2023 at 11:24 PM substance? i take it that you mean, a 'meaty" comment...not important jeff...'one' grain uv sea salt, will overwhelm your entire maw's palate...it's the same with thought...even one word can overwhelm a poet's hunger for an accolade from time to time....by-the-by; be terse with your poesy(i've noticed your aspiration to find fruition with this regard)....most important, meld the stanzas that your readers don't have time to guess, yet appreciate your thought....i'm reading you....much love, james