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James' Feminine

. amin amine (i'm losing it people...lol; it's pronounced amin) lin line(can one imagine, english lit teacherz, instructing their students to draw a 'lin', down the center uv their note pads) that's right, i spelled it lin, instead uv line <-long "i" spin spine(or, can i take the car for a spine) win wine(i'm thirsty, may i have the flask uv win) <- ;) pin pine (i'm the cultivator uv pin nuts) feminin<--- that's nin feminine<-that's nine, long "i" i speak english precious readerz, i'm still unto this day, confused with the english vocabulary, and i can't be coxed into believing, that the third syllable in feminine, iz not pronounced "nine"<-long "i" fem-i-nine. short i's are pronounced "i" az in, it long i's are pronounced "i" az in, 'I' belong to her (did ;) Iodine, turpentine...thank Jehovah God Almighty i do, in Jesus Christ's name, for; "poetic license", whut would i do dear poets! Therefore, for those who indulge mine writes, know that... "james' "feminine" iz pronounced, "fem-i-nine" az in #'9' i should have shared this, long ago....much luv, me ;) "This Spring" spoke i to mine feminine whom mine feminine "would marriage cause yourn sing" "cross the t's and dot the i's" 'fore i close for the night mine eyne" "yes" said she "yes yes" "it's yes" "it's yes" And off went hern green mine Winter dreamz dream after dream after dream ;)

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Date: 9/19/2023 3:10:00 AM
Hi James. I'd make a comment with substance, but after reading some of your other poems and comments, see that you don't reply; so what's the point. Thanks
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 9/30/2023 12:58:00 AM
Thanks for the advice, James. Truly appreciated. Hugs
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James Peranteau
Date: 9/29/2023 11:24:00 PM
substance? i take it that you mean, a 'meaty" comment...not important jeff...'one' grain uv sea salt, will overwhelm your entire maw's palate...it's the same with thought...even one word can overwhelm a poet's hunger for an accolade from time to time....by-the-by; be terse with your poesy(i've noticed your aspiration to find fruition with this regard)....most important, meld the stanzas that your readers don't have time to guess, yet appreciate your thought....i'm reading you....much love, james

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