Jalopy, Scottie and Love

Each crescent moon rewinds time’s notes 
and sweeps me back to our blessed haven
where long has stayed my peaked presence.
I would love to be back in our cozy cabin
where we grew magical feelings of happy.

All of our shared yesterday seconds
were love expressed while money distressed
and both such ways were my life’s best days.
We could barely afford a potty when on our
first anniversary you wrapped a Scottie puppy
inside an old jalopy that was red bow capped.
A car some might call shoddy mapped our 
love in endless feelings of freedom's happy.

Tonight’s moon knows our fiftieth anniversary
soon comes, it poses then my life will be done 
and with Scottie, you will greet me in our old jalopy.
I have long prayed to regain our embracing love
within Heaven's divine feelings of happy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Makama Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 1:08 PM
Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..
Godwin Avatar
July 30, 2019 at 7:02 PM
You left me especially sweet comments, Funom, and I feel blessed to have them, thank you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Cornish Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 12:44 PM
Love the romantic memories shared CayCay
Messina Avatar
July 28, 2019 at 7:03 AM
Very nice CayCay. Love the story. Congratulations...:) Hugs
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 11:42 PM
Congratulations on getting on his short list CayCay. I was hoping this would do well. xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 9:32 PM
Lovely, CayCay. Congrats on your win.
Mcguire Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Nice one! CayCay! Great Win
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 6:19 PM
Congratulations, CayCay!
Mcgee Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 3:53 PM
I would have loved a Scottie in an old jalopy too. Happy memories so deserving of a win!
Canerdy Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 3:45 PM
CayCay, CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! Janice
Proxenos Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 3:31 PM
You are so talented CayCay and your poems flow like a cascading waterfall,so naturally,never stressed and always with such candid imagination. Love and hugs, Jenny.
Toney Avatar
July 27, 2019 at 10:45 AM
CayCay, this is a sweet poem of remembrance that touches the heart. I love the phrase "endless feelings of freedom's happy." A Fav Poem for me. ~Mark
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 9:20 PM
A brilliant entry for the contest Caycay. I loved the colorful imagery. I hope this is a top winner! xxoo
Romios Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 12:57 PM
True delight in a well penned poem Pamagiota
Trifiatis Avatar
July 26, 2019 at 2:12 AM
Tenderly romantic writing that touches the core of one's heart dear, CayCay. Wish you the best outcome,! Poetic Hugs
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