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Jake Dog

Jake Dog belly up Cuervo bottoms up Heart feels the burn Stomach feels the churn of something done wrong by me or by the one I love maybe I should look above the bottom of the bottle or maybe I should step on the throttle away from this way station that makes me feel this degradation a life lost but what is the cost of leaving whats become so fond to me while I've developed this bond to her everything dark and bright how long can I fight don't take the Jake Dog he is the one that leads through the fog that holds together all that began under the green flash

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/21/2010 7:05:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. continue to share your creative writings with us all.. enjoyed your expressions in poetry tonight...luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.
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Date: 1/21/2010 9:04:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Rex. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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