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Jaime's Fall

I hear the women crying, I hear the children scream
I see the sun’s fiery rays, each and every glowing beam
 
I feel the wind blowing and then my hair gets in my eyes
I try and wipe my tears away as I silently say goodbye
 
And up above is Jamie, as he stands upon the roof
His clothes flailing in the wind, his eyes completely aloof
 
He told me he’d be leaving. I didn’t think it would be this way
If I would have seen it earlier, maybe he could have been saved
 
Instead, I’m watching him above, starting to accept
The fact that he can’t overcome the complete lack of respect
 
His father told him he was worthless, his mother told him to die
I curse them both for not being here now as their son stares into the sky
 
The drugs that Jaime had turned to had helped him for some time
But side effects also included Jaime losing his mind
 
Jaime would cry and then he’d smile and then he’d lose his cool
He’d tell the world he was enjoying life before getting in fights during school
 
The principal said he would go nowhere, the kids said he was crazy
The police said he was just a minor, the teachers said he was lazy
 
And now together, we are all watching, begging him to take two steps back
But Jaime has already signed his deal, he and death already made a pact
 
In his eyes, I know he’s gone already. He isn’t nervous, anxious or scared
I know that he can’t hear me, but I don’t really care
 
“I’ll miss you with all my heart, my friend.  Goodbye,” I choke as I call
And just right cue, Jaime smiles, spreads his arms wide, and falls

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/31/2011 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Pratik. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2011 6:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, pratik
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