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Jailed In His Own Skin

In the shade of his smile,

Echoes much depletedness.


In the depths of his eyes,

Is a spectacle of inanition,


In the chaos of his heart,

Lays one true thing, a lie...

 

His cocoon of titanium,

A grim cage of no opportunity.

 

Boundaries set,

Letting nobody in.

 

His deserted being,

Hidden in the shadows.

 

Reflecting a destroyed boy,  
 A hollow shell of who he once was.

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/16/2014 10:08:00 PM Thank you Fatima, for the reply on my comment,, PD Login to Reply

Kanour Med Date: 7/16/2014 4:42:00 AM I liked it :) and enjoyed it fatime :) Login to Reply Fatima Ammar Date: 7/16/2014 10:19:00 AM That's good. :)

Amanda Reslink Date: 1/30/2014 2:03:00 PM So sad, but sweet and beautiful! Login to Reply Fatima Ammar Date: 7/16/2014 10:20:00 AM I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Skat A Date: 1/6/2014 4:42:00 PM Fatima, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT Login to Reply Fatima Ammar Date: 7/16/2014 10:21:00 AM Hahaha of course! I'd love to be poetry friends! :) :)

Donna Jones Date: 1/5/2014 10:58:00 PM A very interesting and intriguing poem...:-) :-) Login to Reply Fatima Ammar Date: 7/16/2014 10:22:00 AM Thanks for the feedback!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/5/2014 2:44:00 PM About your poem, it's deep when trying to get through the walls that hide everything in-between. Fatima, I have a poem called Wallpaper.. I can relate it to the nature of your awesome poem.... happy 2014...LINDA Login to Reply Fatima Ammar Date: 7/16/2014 10:20:00 AM I'll check that out :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/5/2014 2:38:00 PM - Welcome to P-Soup, Fatima ! - - You write very well - hope there will be many more poems in the future !! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck !! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more .... another day :) - All the best for the year 2014 ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Fatima Ammar Date: 1/5/2014 2:43:00 PM Ooo Norway! I'd love to go there. Thanks for reading and welcoming me. And yes there will be many more. And of course I mean to read other people's poems.

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/5/2014 2:33:00 PM This is very deep Fatima, ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Fatima Ammar Date: 1/5/2014 2:41:00 PM Thanks for the welcome! I'm glad you like my poem almost as much as I enjoyed yours. I'm glad I discovered this site. I'll check out your contest :)