Jail Bird

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You spend all the day sneaking about but you'll pay for the rules that you flout You can bet your sweet tail, you are going to jail and you'll sing like a bird to get out!

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Terry Flood

Date: 4/1/2024 11:56:00 AM

Congrats on your fun win, Lycia. Terry

Lycia Harding
Date: 4/1/2024 7:53:00 PM

Thank you Terry! xoxo, LyLy

Jan Allison

Date: 4/1/2024 1:31:00 AM

Love that ending line and the title was purrrrfect Lycia:-) many congrats, hugs jan xx

Lycia Harding
Date: 4/1/2024 7:54:00 PM

Thank you Jan! xoxo, LyLy

Margarita Lillico

Date: 3/31/2024 8:24:00 AM

Congratulations! I have to say your last line made me LOL! It still does!!! Great limerick!

Lycia Harding
Date: 4/1/2024 7:54:00 PM

Thank you Margarita! xoxo, LyLy

Tom Woody

Date: 3/27/2024 5:19:00 AM

Let's hope he's not a crow because...

Daniel Caplin

Date: 3/27/2024 4:16:00 AM

Hi Lycia ,Great Limerick , clever and extremely witty , Daniel.

Lycia Harding
Date: 4/1/2024 7:54:00 PM

Thank you Daniel! xoxo, LyLy