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(written after I saw this incredible movie a few years ago) Apocalypto, we begin anew. To woodland deep we go, where waters still flow crystalline. Apocalypto, we begin! From death there is new origin, for Earth cries out and makes it so! Apocalypto, we begin anew. To woodland deep we go.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/12/2010 7:03:00 AM
OOOOOOWWWWOOOOOOOO! I can almost feel my essence pushing up the soil in that deep woodland you talk about. "Where waters still crystalline flow." I like this idea...a new Eden. I'm going down the list, dear Andrea. Lots of gold hidden down there. Love, daver
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Date: 3/30/2010 1:02:00 PM
A welcome sense of faith, hope and joy emanates from your words, Andrea. I haven't seen this movie -- yet! But if it inspires such feelings, I must rent it. This triolet goes to my favorites! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/29/2010 6:37:00 PM
Interesting work. Who is Apacalypto? Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/26/2010 9:08:00 AM
Great film Andrea, i thoroughly enjoyed it > and your poem does it justice >> James
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Date: 3/25/2010 4:43:00 PM
Hi Andrea, forgot to tell you that the Mandau river is a small river flowing through Zittau and only about 50 meters from my place and flows into the Neisse river which is the border between Germany and Poland... Keep writing...Love, Gert
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Date: 3/25/2010 3:05:00 PM
I did see the movie . U got a great way of putting that movie into a poem . Great job. IRMA
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Date: 3/25/2010 12:00:00 PM
Jolting movie- I like your poem about it, one of a kind
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Date: 3/25/2010 7:18:00 AM
I did not see the movie, but can imagine now what it was about, Andrea...Thank your for sharing it with us and thanks for your comments...Love, Gert
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Date: 3/24/2010 7:23:00 PM
Renewal? I think I would prefer escape.............laugh.............great poem all the same!
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Date: 3/24/2010 7:13:00 PM
I was just trying to get something to rhyme with pluto. Did not mean to offend.
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Date: 3/24/2010 6:54:00 PM
A great write indeed! Thank you for sharing. Caryl
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Date: 3/24/2010 5:43:00 PM
great write,Andrea!keep it up,ps a hippie yes,lol!
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Date: 3/24/2010 4:17:00 PM
That movie was awesome^.^ i watched it many time. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 3/24/2010 3:52:00 PM
Well I guess u know I did not see the movie but the poem is quite interesting and luv that line ...from death there is new origin.. how original... luv it.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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