Andrea Dietrich Poet Triolet

Jaguar Paw's Triolet

(written after I saw this incredible movie a few years ago)

Apocalypto, we begin
anew.  To woodland deep we go,
where waters still flow crystalline.
Apocalypto, we begin!
From death there is new origin,
for Earth cries out and makes it so!
Apocalypto, we begin
anew.  To woodland deep we go.

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Daver Austin April 12, 2010 at 7:03 AM OOOOOOWWWWOOOOOOOO! I can almost feel my essence pushing up the soil in that deep woodland you talk about. "Where waters still crystalline flow." I like this idea...a new Eden. I'm going down the list, dear Andrea. Lots of gold hidden down there. Love, daver

Carolyn Devonshire March 30, 2010 at 1:02 PM A welcome sense of faith, hope and joy emanates from your words, Andrea. I haven't seen this movie -- yet! But if it inspires such feelings, I must rent it. This triolet goes to my favorites! Love, Carolyn

Matthew Anish March 29, 2010 at 6:37 PM Interesting work. Who is Apacalypto? Peace and Blessings Matthew Anish

James Fraser March 26, 2010 at 9:08 AM Great film Andrea, i thoroughly enjoyed it > and your poem does it justice >> James

Gert W. Knop March 25, 2010 at 4:43 PM Hi Andrea, forgot to tell you that the Mandau river is a small river flowing through Zittau and only about 50 meters from my place and flows into the Neisse river which is the border between Germany and Poland... Keep writing...Love, Gert

Skat A March 25, 2010 at 3:05 PM I did see the movie . U got a great way of putting that movie into a poem . Great job. IRMA

Mitch White March 25, 2010 at 12:00 PM Jolting movie- I like your poem about it, one of a kind

Gert W. Knop March 25, 2010 at 7:18 AM I did not see the movie, but can imagine now what it was about, Andrea...Thank your for sharing it with us and thanks for your comments...Love, Gert

David Byrne March 24, 2010 at 7:23 PM Renewal? I think I would prefer escape.............laugh.............great poem all the same!

Doris Culverhouse March 24, 2010 at 7:13 PM I was just trying to get something to rhyme with pluto. Did not mean to offend.

Caryl Muzzey March 24, 2010 at 6:54 PM A great write indeed! Thank you for sharing. Caryl

Bill Frew March 24, 2010 at 5:43 PM great write,Andrea!keep it up,ps a hippie yes,lol!

Lynette Chachere March 24, 2010 at 4:17 PM That movie was awesome^.^ i watched it many time. -Always&Forever Lynette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 24, 2010 at 3:52 PM Well I guess u know I did not see the movie but the poem is quite interesting and luv that line ...from death there is new origin.. how original... luv it.. luv.. Linda-Marie