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Jaguar

jungle green wild eyes

smoky shadow softly leaps...

cooling river swim

7/23/20

For 'Haiku or Senyru' contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Line Gauthier

August 2, 2020 at 5:03 AM

Congrats on your top win, Michelle.

Constance La France

July 29, 2020 at 4:50 PM

Michelle, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance

Michelle Faulkner

July 31, 2020 at 4:59 PM

Thank you for the placement, I am flattered you made it a Fave-

Aditi Mishra

July 28, 2020 at 12:01 PM

So lovely and vibrant. Congratulations on your win Michelle! :) Much love

Jenish Somadas

July 26, 2020 at 10:26 PM

Wonderful imagery Michelle.. Congrats on your great win...

Andrea Dietrich

July 26, 2020 at 7:31 PM

back with my congrats to you, Michelle.

Eve Roper

July 26, 2020 at 3:56 PM

Great imagery, Michelle, congratulations on your win with these beautiful Haiku. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

July 26, 2020 at 3:52 PM

very descriptive i especially like the alliteration in the middle line:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2020 at 3:03 PM

Like the imagery! Congratulations!

Paul Callus

July 26, 2020 at 11:32 AM

I can envision that jaguar leaping with joy into a cool river, Michelle, especially if the weather is as hot as it is now in Malta! Congratulations on your top win. Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 26, 2020 at 11:16 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

July 24, 2020 at 4:19 PM

VERY well done!

John Watt

July 24, 2020 at 11:42 AM

Delightful haiku, Michelle. Loved the middle line. I was tensely expecting a wild-eyed pounce on a potential meal, but J is just taking a relaxing swim! Nice.