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jungle green wild eyes smoky shadow softly leaps... cooling river swim 7/23/20 For 'Haiku or Senyru' contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 8/2/2020 5:03:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Michelle.
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Date: 7/29/2020 4:50:00 PM
Michelle, congratulations on your win in my haiku contest with this excellent write, a FAV for me _Constance
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/31/2020 4:59:00 PM
Thank you for the placement, I am flattered you made it a Fave-
Date: 7/28/2020 12:01:00 PM
So lovely and vibrant. Congratulations on your win Michelle! :) Much love
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Date: 7/26/2020 10:26:00 PM
Wonderful imagery Michelle.. Congrats on your great win...
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Date: 7/26/2020 7:31:00 PM
back with my congrats to you, Michelle.
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Date: 7/26/2020 3:56:00 PM
Great imagery, Michelle, congratulations on your win with these beautiful Haiku. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/26/2020 3:52:00 PM
very descriptive i especially like the alliteration in the middle line:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/26/2020 3:03:00 PM
Like the imagery! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/26/2020 11:32:00 AM
I can envision that jaguar leaping with joy into a cool river, Michelle, especially if the weather is as hot as it is now in Malta! Congratulations on your top win. Regards // paul
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Date: 7/26/2020 11:16:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/24/2020 4:19:00 PM
VERY well done!
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Date: 7/24/2020 11:42:00 AM
Delightful haiku, Michelle. Loved the middle line. I was tensely expecting a wild-eyed pounce on a potential meal, but J is just taking a relaxing swim! Nice.
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Date: 7/24/2020 9:36:00 AM
Ah, very descriptive it pops of talent dear Michelle, good luck with the contest xo
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Date: 7/23/2020 10:18:00 PM
Now that's a wonderful contrast for such a wild animal, Michelle:)
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Date: 7/23/2020 7:59:00 PM
That cat brings the fire -- nice juxtaposition with the river. Two thumbs way up! Thanks, Michelle. :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/23/2020 8:09:00 PM
You're the 'cat's meow,' gw! Stay safe :)