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Jagged Water

I live upon a shard of glass deeply set in a morass once a year the sun does shine and I reflect what isn't mine Then you come and touch my face and tell me there’s a different place you promise me it’s really there and actually, it’s not that rare and from the surface of my glass sprouts an awkward piece of grass I protest stay my ancient place dictator I and mighty safe and don't forget my yearly shine reflecting things that aren't mine You boast of beauty cloud and lake people pair for floatings sake people floating I do sigh? quiet now, and wait to die I do cling to my morass my family of reflective glass but as they fall they chip me sore eventually I’ll be no more All at once I see the water there without a sign of slaughter a person floating on a cloud speaking loud and looking proud then a tidal wave appears I’m suddenly all eyes and ears I clench my jagged glass with might but only see an awesome sight the clouds unite with little fright I only dream of lakes that night

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Date: 3/26/2016 4:21:00 PM
Timothy, I also appreciate the time you took to comment my reply ...Linda
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Date: 3/26/2016 8:55:00 AM
A dark reflective write. The imagery is effective.
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Timothy Barry
Date: 3/26/2016 4:18:00 PM
Thanks Richard I was really thinking about imagery here.
Date: 3/25/2016 11:53:00 PM
wow, this is sharp and I love the imagery. Epic... LINDA
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Timothy Barry
Date: 3/26/2016 4:19:00 PM
Linda I really appreciate your insights. Thanks you so much.
Date: 3/25/2016 9:25:00 PM
Timothy, I like this deep poem, it reads like a misty nightmare, you are a terrific writer, I am loving this 7 ~
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Timothy Barry
Date: 3/25/2016 10:12:00 PM
Thanks Broken, yeah just starting out, so I really appreciate the comments and support. You're kind.
Date: 3/18/2016 10:39:00 AM
As I discover new poets and their writings this one caught my eye and made me see the visual you were conveying! I do look forward to reading your works and having my eye opened further! Insightful Write! Write On!
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Date: 3/16/2016 8:27:00 PM
An awesome write, love the intensity of this poem
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Timothy Barry
Date: 3/17/2016 12:53:00 AM
Thanks Gail!

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