Jagged Water

I live upon a shard of glass
deeply set in a morass
once a year the sun does shine
and I reflect what isn't mine

Then you come and touch my face
and tell me there’s a different place
you promise me it’s really there
and actually, it’s not that rare
and from the surface of my glass
sprouts an awkward piece of grass

I protest stay my ancient place
dictator I and mighty safe
and don't forget my yearly shine 
reflecting things that aren't mine

You boast of beauty cloud and lake
people pair for floatings sake
people floating I do sigh?
quiet now, and wait to die

I do cling to my morass
my family of reflective glass
but as they fall they chip me sore
eventually I’ll be no more

All at once I see the water
there without a sign of slaughter
a person floating on a cloud
speaking loud and looking proud
then a tidal wave appears
I’m suddenly all eyes and ears
I clench my jagged glass with might
but only see an awesome sight
the clouds unite with little fright
I only dream of lakes that night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Timothy, I also appreciate the time you took to comment my reply ...Linda
Lamoureux Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 8:55 AM
A dark reflective write. The imagery is effective.
Barry Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 4:18 PM
Thanks Richard I was really thinking about imagery here.
A   Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 11:53 PM
wow, this is sharp and I love the imagery. Epic... LINDA
Barry Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 4:19 PM
Linda I really appreciate your insights. Thanks you so much.
La France Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 9:25 PM
Timothy, I like this deep poem, it reads like a misty nightmare, you are a terrific writer, I am loving this 7 ~
Barry Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 10:12 PM
Thanks Broken, yeah just starting out, so I really appreciate the comments and support. You're kind.
Ashe Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 10:39 AM
As I discover new poets and their writings this one caught my eye and made me see the visual you were conveying! I do look forward to reading your works and having my eye opened further! Insightful Write! Write On!
Underwood Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 8:27 PM
An awesome write, love the intensity of this poem
Barry Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 12:53 AM
Thanks Gail!
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