Get Your Premium Membership

Jagged

Among the broken shards that lay Diamonds glitter in the dust Cuts and wounds trace a jagged path Across my bleeding heart I reach my hands to gather all of them Those fragile bits that scattered all about Along this path, a chosen vision seen To hold them, precious pieces, next to me For even the most beautiful flower Will wilt when cut But while I will grow myself more rugged still To hold thorn strong against a life so bruised My murmur of faith can be gently felt As I rise beside the fallen shadow parts By morn my eyes will see the sun arise My imperfections beautifully repaired Just wait until I mend upon this shore And I will surely fly away again Jagged contest 9-12-21 8-13-21 I Will Fly Away 10th place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/15/2021 6:53:00 AM
Jeanne, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
Login to Reply
Date: 8/21/2021 9:43:00 AM
Powerful images filled with brokeness and the birth of hope with each dawn. Nicely done Jeanne. So good to see you writing again. Blessings of wholeness to you!
Login to Reply
Mcgee Avatar
Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/22/2021 9:49:00 AM
Hi Sam...my biggest problems this year have been access to the internet. So, thank you for stopping by to read and comment. I will soak up PS while I can. :D
Date: 8/20/2021 9:32:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, expressed in your awesome poetic style. Delighted am I especially with your concluding stanza. God bless you.
Login to Reply
Mcgee Avatar
Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/22/2021 9:50:00 AM
Thank you so much Beata. This year has been tough for so many and the idea of mending something broken to make beautiful again really was an inspiration.
Date: 8/20/2021 6:48:00 PM
nicely written Jeanne, congratulations on your win!
Login to Reply
Mcgee Avatar
Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 8/20/2021 9:18:00 PM
Hi Sandra. Thanks so much.

Book: Shattered Sighs