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Jaded Love

Jaded love, deepened wound weeps
    Theater dark, actors vanish
        No encore no ovation 
            Flowers lay dying...

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James Fraser

April 18, 2011 at 11:07 AM

This poem feels as if it was written for me. Wonderful poetry Sharon....:)

Carolyn Devonshire

February 4, 2011 at 1:09 PM

Your poem gave me chills, Sharon. There is nothing more painful than a love that has become jaded. Wonderful work, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

February 3, 2011 at 1:59 PM

I absolutly love this!!! your are a true poet my dear...luv Michael

Christopher Marcum

February 3, 2011 at 12:30 PM

smile -- just another fave within your radiant and growing collection my dear, precious Sharon -- love, christopher ~

Christopher Marcum

February 3, 2011 at 12:29 PM

smile -- intensely felt moment presented from the wonderous theatre of a very beautiful lady and priceless Soul -- one can envision a few different images behind this bluegrayblack canvas' colours my dear, although, never, could i imagine someone as lovely as yourself, ever standing upon this curtains drawn stage with even a single petal from, your fragrant beauty as that of a rose, fading, withering, or dying away -- cont:)