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Jade Butterflies Premiere Contest Winner

Sloth-toed ivy flutters in lissome breeze, each pentagram the pinion of a jade butterfly clustered on a brick wall. In the throes of spring they sojourn from dark loam toward shingled firmament, past celestial windows pewter with light as they besmirch diaphanous peril, imagining when they reach heaven they will repose like angels in the shimmering damask of God's aura. 5/23/18

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Date: 6/9/2018 11:50:00 PM
This poem filled my soul with hope Dale. I am always amazed at your wonderful creations! Congratulations on your top win!: )
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/10/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thank you, Connie.
Date: 6/9/2018 10:19:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Dale.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/10/2018 8:41:00 AM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 6/9/2018 5:30:00 PM
Wonderful write, Dale, you are a master of expression and imagery - never disappoint. Congrats on your well-deserved win, my friend! Blessings! :-)
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Date: 6/9/2018 7:01:00 AM
Very pretty, Dale! Congrats on your top win!
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Date: 6/8/2018 6:01:00 PM
WOW many congrats Dale so good to see this top the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/8/2018 7:25:00 PM
Thanks much, Jan!
Date: 6/8/2018 12:04:00 PM
I knew this poem was special, look two top wins for the price of one! Congrats again!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/8/2018 12:21:00 PM
Thank you, John!
Date: 6/8/2018 9:25:00 AM
Congrats on 1st place finish. Well written. Very imaginative. Oliver
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/8/2018 9:26:00 AM
Thanks, Oliver!
Date: 6/8/2018 9:04:00 AM
Congratulations for your top win Dale! :)
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Date: 6/4/2018 11:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this beautiful poem.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/5/2018 8:12:00 AM
Thanks, Susan.
Date: 6/4/2018 7:32:00 PM
Great use of the 8 words and,Dale , with great inspirational imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/4/2018 7:49:00 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 6/4/2018 10:58:00 AM
Mesmerizing write Dale, so unique I forgot this poem had eight required words, they were utilized so deftly and seamlessly, just amazing, congrats on a shared win!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/4/2018 11:00:00 AM
Thanks so much, John.
Date: 5/26/2018 2:38:00 AM
gorgeous writing as always, Dale . YOu have the true poet's soul.
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/26/2018 7:39:00 AM
Aw, thanks, Andrea.
Date: 5/25/2018 11:38:00 AM
Lovely write Dale, good work...
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/25/2018 12:00:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charlie.
Date: 5/23/2018 9:38:00 PM
A dazzling portrayal, Dale! The required words melt into the beauty of your poem. Stunning! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/24/2018 7:47:00 AM
Thanks, Susan.
Date: 5/23/2018 6:35:00 PM
your imagery is amazing Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/23/2018 7:41:00 PM
Thanks very much, Jan!
Date: 5/23/2018 5:02:00 PM
Beautiful Dale. I enjoyed this :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/23/2018 7:40:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi.

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