Premiere Contest WinnerJade Butterflies

Sloth-toed ivy flutters
in lissome breeze,
each pentagram the pinion
of a jade butterfly
clustered on a brick wall.
In the throes of spring
they sojourn
from dark loam
toward shingled firmament,
past celestial windows
pewter with light
as they besmirch
diaphanous peril,
imagining
when they reach heaven
they will repose like angels
in the shimmering damask
of God's aura.

5/23/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Marcum Wong Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 11:50 PM
This poem filled my soul with hope Dale. I am always amazed at your wonderful creations! Congratulations on your top win!: )
Cozart Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Thank you, Connie.
Gauthier Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 10:19 PM
Congrats on your top win, Dale.
Cozart Avatar
June 10, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Thanks, Line!
Barden Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 5:30 PM
Wonderful write, Dale, you are a master of expression and imagery - never disappoint. Congrats on your well-deserved win, my friend! Blessings! :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 9, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Very pretty, Dale! Congrats on your top win!
Allison Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 6:01 PM
WOW many congrats Dale so good to see this top the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Thanks much, Jan!
Hamilton Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:04 PM
I knew this poem was special, look two top wins for the price of one! Congrats again!
Cozart Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:21 PM
Thank you, John!
Mckeithan Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 9:25 AM
Congrats on 1st place finish. Well written. Very imaginative. Oliver
Cozart Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 9:26 AM
Thanks, Oliver!
Sands Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 9:04 AM
Congratulations for your top win Dale! :)
Gentry Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:10 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win with this beautiful poem.
Cozart Avatar
June 5, 2018 at 8:12 AM
Thanks, Susan.
Roper Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 7:32 PM
Great use of the 8 words and,Dale , with great inspirational imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Cozart Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 7:49 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Hamilton Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 10:58 AM
Mesmerizing write Dale, so unique I forgot this poem had eight required words, they were utilized so deftly and seamlessly, just amazing, congrats on a shared win!
Cozart Avatar
June 4, 2018 at 11:00 AM
Thanks so much, John.
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 2:38 AM
gorgeous writing as always, Dale . YOu have the true poet's soul.
Cozart Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Aw, thanks, Andrea.
Smith Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Lovely write Dale, good work...
Cozart Avatar
May 25, 2018 at 12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charlie.
Ashley Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:38 PM
A dazzling portrayal, Dale! The required words melt into the beauty of your poem. Stunning! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Thanks, Susan.
Allison Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 6:35 PM
your imagery is amazing Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 7:41 PM
Thanks very much, Jan!
Sands Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 5:02 PM
Beautiful Dale. I enjoyed this :)
Cozart Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 7:40 PM
Thank you, Heidi.
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