Jade

There was a big 
macho guy named 
Jade.

When you saw him
he put you in the 
mind of Andrew Dice
Clay.

Who wanted to be
a comedian. He often
thought it shouldn't 
be that hard.
 
The thing was, once he got
 introduced the crowd 
roared with laughter 
without him saying a 
word.

He was dumb founded . 
He didn't think it would 
be so easy. Jade got 
really famous.
 
He changed his name to 
Jayden.Said a few words 
and got booed off the stage.





8-27-16

humorousfree verse

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

November 16, 2016 at 12:37 PM

Cool and funny poem, Alexis. Very pointed humor. Says a lot about human nature, people don't like change much, or don't accept it easily enough. Good, smart write. Kudos. Much love to you.

Paul Callus

September 1, 2016 at 2:25 PM

People like us for what we are; changes might not appeal to them at all! Of course, it could also work the other way round:) ~ Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

August 30, 2016 at 3:06 PM

This was a great fun poem to read, Alexis. Too bad for "Jayden!"

Nette Onclaud

August 27, 2016 at 3:23 PM

ohh dear.. i flipped on my chair, lol, alexis..huggs

Lynn Marie

August 27, 2016 at 1:58 PM

A great poem, very creatively penned. Has me wondering the impact names here at PS have on us :-) thank you for my 'thinking' moment today Alexis :-) blessings, lynn

Casarah Nance

August 27, 2016 at 1:43 PM

I've known more males named Jamie in my lifetime than females, you write disproves the saying "would a rose by any other name smell as sweet" sometimes it is the name that proves a thing. hugs x