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Jacqueline I'Lyezette


Just the other day, I came across a picture of you with your horse
And I was amazed to see how much we looked alike


    mother loved horses and daughter and mother
    had a resemblance and the love was deep


Could it be true that you are mere words upon a cold stone
Quiet, beautiful and kind Jacqueline
Unbelievable you left this world on Mother's Day


    the writer has a hard time accepting the death
    of her mother, who was a special person and
    the timing of the death makes it even more difficult


Entangled, meshed, intertwined are our souls for eternity
Love is what you left with me
I am proud to be the daughter of one such as you 


    the love for mother will never cease, there
    is great pride in the daughter for her mother


Not a day will go by that you are not in my heart
Especially on mother's day


    even death cannot take away the love 

    

Jacqueline

Just the other day I came across a picture of you with your horse,
And was amazed to see how much we looked alike;
Could it be true that you are mere words upon cold stone,
Quiet, beautiful and kind Jacqueline.
Unbelievable you left this world on Mother's Day,
Entangled, meshed, intertwined are our souls for eternity;
Love is what you left with me,
I am proud to be the daughter of one such as you.
Not a day will go by that you are not in my heart,
Especially on Mother's Day.

March 14, 2015

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July 3, 2015

Poetry/Verse/"Jacqueline I'Lyezette"
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Horne Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 3:58 PM
and it's truly a beautiful poem for your much loved, much missed mother, my friend x
La France Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 6:31 PM
Jack, thanks for the visit and the nice comment ~
D. Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 10:08 AM
that is a pretty cool idea for a contest. your interpretations where spot on shame he didn't get to judge it.
La France Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 10:36 AM
Nathan thank you for the nice comment ~
Beaufort Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 2:41 AM
I think that we honor the ones we love by the way we live and the choices we make. So, I am so very much in awe of your sense of honor. Your love and feelings are a great power in this universe. So much, in fact, that you have brightened the color of the world. This is such a wonder and power. Embracing it all and being so clear and honest. May I honor you right now by saying that I think that your words are beautiful and so well put together. Thank you for being here--web site and planet.
La France Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 7:30 AM
Duke, thank you for that beautiful comment and the compliments, so appreciated ~
Dietrich Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 8:09 PM
I love the layout how you did this challenge, Constance. It's too bad the contest can never be judged but I am glad to finally see this one.
La France Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 7:31 AM
Andrea, thank you for coming to visit this poem, yes it is so sad that FJ cannot judge it because it was a beautiful contest, thanks for the compliment ~
Meade Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 5:10 PM
A wonderful poem filled with a deep love that fills my heart with joy.
La France Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 7:32 AM
David, oh thanks for that sweet comment, appreciate ~
Martin Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 4:26 PM
Beautifully written, Constance. You exress emotion so wonderfully!
La France Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 4:29 PM
Thomas, thanks for visiting and the nice comment appreciate
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