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Some moments were made . . . to stay with us forever

Just the other day I came across a picture of you with your horse And was amazed to see how much we looked alike Could it be true that you are mere words upon a cold stone Quiet, beautiful and kind Jacqueline Unbelievable you left this world on Mother's Day Entangled, meshed, intertwined are our souls for eternity Love is what you left with me I am so proud to be the daughter of one such as you Not a day will go by that you are not in my heart Especially on Mother's Day _________________________________ March 14, 2015 Poetry/Acrostic/JACQUELINE Copyright Protected, ID 03-653-962-14 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France For the Standard contest Acrostic on Mother's Day, sponsor, Tammy Reams, Judged 04/2015 First Place

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Archana Garg

Date: 4/24/2015 11:22:00 AM

congrats on your great win.

Judy Konos

Date: 4/12/2015 10:45:00 AM

Beautiful! The poetry and the photo...Congratulations....

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 4/10/2015 5:59:00 AM

BW Congrats on your win as well, Stunning Poem :)

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/6/2015 11:04:00 AM

Such a warm and loving tribute to your mom, BW. A heartfelt congratulations to your for your top win! Hugs, Sandra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/6/2015 10:28:00 AM

Congrats..Sara

Mohan Chutani

Date: 4/6/2015 12:53:00 AM

Constance, a lovely tribute to your mother. Congrats on top win. Mohan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/5/2015 9:09:00 PM

Glad to see this placed at the top. BIG congrats, constance.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/5/2015 8:42:00 PM

Memories of mom are unforgettable. Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings Eve

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/5/2015 7:35:00 PM

Congratulations. This is totally beautiful.

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/5/2015 4:04:00 PM

Your words are like a bouquet of flowers that brighten the senses and pay tribute to the love that was your mother. You have stored all the best your mother gave to you in your heart so that you may dispense it to others and they too can be touched by the experience. Congratulations on your win. Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2015 1:58:00 PM

absolutely beautiful - wonderful image and imagery - brought tears to my eyes - congrats on your tops spot

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/5/2015 12:52:00 PM

Completely deserving of the top spot. She would have been so proud of you. Congrats. BG

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/5/2015 12:08:00 PM

This touches my heart so deeply, dear Constance, for many reasons. The beauty is breathtaking, but also the fact that I too, lost my mother on Mother's Day, and since that day so long ago, that day in May is so bittersweet, with the love from my children, mixed in with one of the most difficult days of my life. Such an honor to share this spot with you.

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/5/2015 11:51:00 AM

She may no longer be with you but she has left you a heritage of beauty, BW. This beauty is apparent in everything you write. Congratulations! Honored to share with you the top spot. Kim :)

Rob Carmack

Date: 4/5/2015 11:03:00 AM

What an eloquent poem and photo. Congrats.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/15/2015 4:45:00 PM

Awww, what a beautiful poem, my friend. Your mom looked lovely - yes, you are definitely a chip off the old block, as we say. Will read just a couple at random - sooo much catching up top do - but will be back later this week to read the rest x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2015 7:03:00 PM

oh my gosh, she was absolutely beautiful, Constance. How sad that she passed away on Mother's day,and yet that is something to remember forever. she sounds simply wonderful. (I adored your tanka, constance!! Kind of wish I had placed it even higher!)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/14/2015 3:27:00 PM

Now this brought a tear to my eye, so loving and beautiful!

Greg Hoffman

Date: 3/14/2015 8:43:00 AM

This one pulls at the heart strings a little,nicely done and good luck in the contest