Jacqueline

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Just the other day I came across a picture of you with your horse
And was amazed to see how much we looked alike
Could it be true that you are mere words upon a cold stone
Quiet, beautiful and kind Jacqueline
Unbelievable you left this world on Mother's Day 
Entangled, meshed, intertwined are our souls for eternity
Love is what you left with me
I am so proud to be the daughter of one such as you
Not a day will go by that you are not in my heart
Especially on Mother's Day



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March 14, 2015

Poetry/Acrostic/JACQUELINE
Copyright Protected, ID 03-653-962-14
All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France


For the Standard contest Acrostic on Mother's Day, 
sponsor, Tammy Reams, Judged 04/2015

First Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/24/2015 11:22:00 AM
congrats on your great win.
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Date: 4/12/2015 10:45:00 AM
Beautiful! The poetry and the photo...Congratulations....
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Date: 4/10/2015 5:59:00 AM
BW Congrats on your win as well, Stunning Poem :)
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Date: 4/6/2015 11:04:00 AM
Such a warm and loving tribute to your mom, BW. A heartfelt congratulations to your for your top win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/6/2015 10:28:00 AM
Congrats..Sara
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Date: 4/6/2015 12:53:00 AM
Constance, a lovely tribute to your mother. Congrats on top win. Mohan
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Date: 4/5/2015 9:09:00 PM
Glad to see this placed at the top. BIG congrats, constance.
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Date: 4/5/2015 8:42:00 PM
Memories of mom are unforgettable. Congratulations on your win a 7. Blessings Eve
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Date: 4/5/2015 7:35:00 PM
Congratulations. This is totally beautiful.
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Date: 4/5/2015 4:04:00 PM
Your words are like a bouquet of flowers that brighten the senses and pay tribute to the love that was your mother. You have stored all the best your mother gave to you in your heart so that you may dispense it to others and they too can be touched by the experience. Congratulations on your win. Emile.
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Date: 4/5/2015 1:58:00 PM
absolutely beautiful - wonderful image and imagery - brought tears to my eyes - congrats on your tops spot
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Date: 4/5/2015 12:52:00 PM
Completely deserving of the top spot. She would have been so proud of you. Congrats. BG
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Date: 4/5/2015 12:08:00 PM
This touches my heart so deeply, dear Constance, for many reasons. The beauty is breathtaking, but also the fact that I too, lost my mother on Mother's Day, and since that day so long ago, that day in May is so bittersweet, with the love from my children, mixed in with one of the most difficult days of my life. Such an honor to share this spot with you.
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Date: 4/5/2015 11:51:00 AM
She may no longer be with you but she has left you a heritage of beauty, BW. This beauty is apparent in everything you write. Congratulations! Honored to share with you the top spot. Kim :)
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Date: 4/5/2015 11:03:00 AM
What an eloquent poem and photo. Congrats.
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Date: 3/15/2015 4:45:00 PM
Awww, what a beautiful poem, my friend. Your mom looked lovely - yes, you are definitely a chip off the old block, as we say. Will read just a couple at random - sooo much catching up top do - but will be back later this week to read the rest x
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Date: 3/14/2015 7:03:00 PM
oh my gosh, she was absolutely beautiful, Constance. How sad that she passed away on Mother's day,and yet that is something to remember forever. she sounds simply wonderful. (I adored your tanka, constance!! Kind of wish I had placed it even higher!)
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Date: 3/14/2015 8:43:00 AM
This one pulls at the heart strings a little,nicely done and good luck in the contest
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