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Jack's Fruitcake

Jack's Fruitcake Jack slipped over a banana bread His feet loafed of slices of lead Poor sweet little gent Upside down he went For he ate the banana peel instead
connie pachecho 2/03/18

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Date: 3/27/2025 3:23:00 PM
Actually I came back to read this limerick. It's not bad (I think). Connie where do you find these? I have no clue. Look at this syllable count 9 8 5 5 10. Yet it's an easy fix for the silly goose that will never be a swan. Well thank you for reading and laughing.
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